Reviews for The Voyeur
Silver Blaze chapter 2 . 5/2/2017
I read the first chapter and I was like, "Oh, well they're just gonna fight each other."
Instead, Megatron turns into a complete PERV and asks them to have sex right in front of him.
Tonnerre chapter 2 . 2/14/2015
Megatron is jelly! I like the whole idea of him lusting after Optimus as well, Gorgeous.
anonymous chapter 2 . 12/29/2014
HOT HOT HOT! Amazing work definatly the beat optimus x elita story I have read so far!
Storylady35 chapter 2 . 9/21/2014
Someone open a window, it is hot in here!

Well done, very well done indead!
RaNzZz chapter 2 . 6/21/2013
Omg haha. sorry for a 2 year late review but wow. This is an epic twist fanfic its so damn fun to read. At 1st i was like "megatron u sick dude" and was gonna quit reading it. But i kept reading it and the time was worth it!. Thanks for starting my day with this even tho this is a 2 year late review.

You still need this :) GJ! added to my favs.
Lady-Shinju chapter 2 . 10/16/2012
Hot! x3 wow. Very original, I like that. Its a very good story. Now please excuse me so i can go see more of you stories. x3
Emajade32439 chapter 2 . 1/18/2012
I am a secret voyeur and loved this little fid. I wish you would make asequel or somethign where Magratron just couldn't mresist getting in on the actions.
MISCrasyaboutfanfics chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
Too bad Megs had to be such a pervert but this is still awesome.
plenoptic chapter 2 . 8/4/2011

This pairing really doesn't get enough love. Really, they don't. I'm glad you assisted them in their, ahem, desires, and I'm so glad you threw the kinky little twist that is MEGATRON in there as well! This is brilliantly well done. I love that it wasn't just straight up porn, but there was real love-making and a very passionate dynamic, even while they were being watched by Megatron. Some die-hards might disagree, but Megatron's request seemed very in-character to me; he's enough of a hedonist that he would give up a great opportunity to off Prime just to enjoy a show. So bravo, this is very well done, and definitely going onto my favorites. I'd love to see you do more work with this pairing!

femme4jack chapter 2 . 7/6/2011
that was very sexy! Loved it. Megatron really did get quite a show.
MissCHSparkles chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
This was fantastic, thanks so much for doing this, I really loved it.

The scenes were very hot and I loved how you portrayed the three characters, you did it perfectly. I particularly enjoyed Megatron and Optimus's Alpha male square offs, especially when Optimus proved to be the more, heh, Mechly.

This was a lovely treat when I got off from work, thanks for the effort you put into it, it was well worth the wait. Hope you did well in your exams, I look forward to future stories.
Salokin Semaj chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
Wow those two got it on! Megatron probley has new respect for optimus and 'lita!
Wolf Prime chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
Wow... I have... Wow! You really let me without words! This was awesome! Very hot! I read all the paragraphs carefully to understand the the scene, and wow! You made it! CONGRATULATIONS! X3 You definetly have a BIG 10... What a 10... A 10000 for this wonderful and hot story! I hope you made more of it! You rock! You are a excellent writer of this category! Optimus and Elita for ever! w

See you around, my friend and congratulations for this story!
Jovianokami chapter 2 . 7/5/2011 that was great. Glad to see Optimus and Elita finally got to be with one other even if someone was watching. I do hope for a other one of Optimus and Elita. :)
ThePeacefulKnight chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
Love it!

And Megatron is a Perv. Really ;D
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