|Reviews for Diary of a Potato Bag|
| midnight1997 chapter 8 . 8/19/2011
i must say, kim and marco actually having a conversation is quite shocking, but this chapter is still awesomee :DDD
| totallycrazy chapter 8 . 8/19/2011
Hey..i really like your story...it's well written and your character Kim is very loveable...i find her really funny and am looking forward to getting to know more about her ..i also like that your description of Marco and Garp is not out of character...soo what i really want to say is ..keep writing and update soon ! ps. i also want to thank you for your regular updates...i'm just so impatient and always very happy when i see a new chapter... ooh and i nearly forgot...i loved the scene where it seemed like she wanted to attack head on and then just kept running ..i really got a laugh out of that one..i can just imagine marco's face in that situation :D...and there's a funny story concerning the title of your story ..while i was reading the new chapter , my father came in and asked what i was reading and i just answered: the diary of a potato bag ...i wish you could have seen my father's face when he heard that :D...wow i just noticed i wrote a really long ps...but don't worry i am going to stop now ..keep up the good work !
| midsummersunshine chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
Well... First, you know, I don't usually read OC included fanfic and this is my first time. But I think this is pretty good by my standard You captured each characters' personality pretty good. Poor Kim, she has to get stuck with Garp's hellish training and Marco's attempt to kick her ass XD
But then I want to give a little correction about Marco's power. I think Oda said that Marco's flame is only for regeneration (for himself only, on the top of that), not for casting attack. So I assume if he could destroy a stone with a kick, it's not because of his DF power, but his haki. I hope that's help
I'll be waiting for updates
| Shiary chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
just threw him off him to- doesnt make sense.
Nice chapter. I really like the WTH He's here! feeling that was transmitted when Marco just popped up.
| Miss Game chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
This made my day
"You're a psychopath!" she shouted, a tinge desperate. "There's no way I'm fighting a psychopath!" XD
This whas really funny i love it.
i have like kim in the begining but now i really love her she is funny and strong,
This chapter is the best right now, will have to wait and see what comes next if that is better XD
| LikeTheSky chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
I LOVE this chapter! :D Teehee...Update soon :)
| praeses chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
My god, I love this story. *laughs* Ah, Smoker tried to kill Kim himself and got trampled by Garp. And the commanding officer was going to throw her off a cliff... That's what I call a bad week, never mind getting made fun of for losing to a girl. I loved it when Kim just ran straight past Marco and kept dodging him. It was like a demented game of tag almost. Poor Kim, she can't catch a break. Getting trained by Garp and then running into Marco. Though Garp seems to have improved her agility and running... You'd be pretty agile after Garp's training I suppose. Well, I can't wait for next week! -praeses
| Yomoko chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
*_* LOVE. IT.
The encounter between Marco and Kim was realistic and the little blushing scene adorable!
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Great chapter XD!
| Eriniase-OvO chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
Indeed you are the bravest potato! I'm quite sure that you're wondering on what I think... and all I can say isss... MORE POTATO CHAPTERS!
| SaaraZ chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
Great chapter again. I smiled all the way end after marco came in to story again :3... hopefully you upload soon again :D
| Kurono-Angel chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
aww she blushed! so adorableeeeee .
and dont worry, i think this is a relle good chapter :) i liked the marco/kim moment, a LOT XD
| Cookie Villain chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
Oh, I did like it! Thank you for the hint.
I wasn't expecting Marco at all in this chapter. That was a nice surprise.
I feel mean, but I'm glad Kim got that knock to a head so she could have a nice chat with him. I don't think he'd spill her secret, but I can tell it altered his opinion of her that bit more.
She blushed! Oh-oh, Kim, you're really done for now!
I applaud Monsieur for his intervention. (Those of us who've watched Dragon Ball Z know very well what kind of damage a pot or frying pan can do...)
I admire the way Kim analyses a situation. I think when she asked him to finish her off she might have melted his heart a little. But, still, an incredible showoff, yes.
Favourite line: Kim froze as alarm signals went off in her head (red flashing lights, deafening horn, shouts from her inner voice… every alarm signal possible).
| Naomi-nami16 chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
Awwwwwwww i love this story! Can't wait to read more.
Love Marco in this, he is so funny. P.S. This story is amazing keep it up!
| Pommyth chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
Marcoooooo *dances* Thank you for your chapter I'm really wondering where this story is going...
Oh and thank you for the thank you
| midnight1997 chapter 7 . 8/16/2011
yay! another awesome chapter :D