This is what Maximum Ride should've been. What an amazing story

I'm as if Max and Fang had a baby which they did that's why my name is Phoenix. Mostly like Max and looove fang

Just finished. God damn, you managed to twist the plot so effortlessly. I thought it was a teen drama, and then they were kidnapped and fucking WINGED and crap. I was shook.

You transitioned the story so well! I wish you still wrote Maximum Ride fanfictions because I would religiously read your stories.

I accidentally pressed the 'last chapter' button instead of 'chapter 1'.

I am going into this story knowing about Gazzy's death, but I am still excited to read it.

ZAC BROWN BAND ALL THE WAY

Put LOTS of sex in it

Haha, I wish my school only had 1,000 students. Our freshman alone constitute 1,000...it’s so crowded in the halls everyday.

You think a thousand students at a school is huge? Try around thirty-one hundred students and a campus frequently described as being akin to a college (what with like twenty six buildings total or something like that).

**I'm totally not trying to be rude, I swear, I'm actually kinda making fun of my own highschool because we're huge and everyone's all like "oh, they're such a good school" or "oh, everyone knows who they are" and everyone who goes there knows the many problems we've got. :))

Lol my name's Simone

why did you make gazzy die...

Fanfiction turn off the spelling and grammar so bad I notice it

Okay so I've read this twice now, with a couple years possibly in between reads and I still read it to the end and enjoyed it. As a fellow writer of Maximum Ride fanfiction I'm in love with your work and how you made the initial behaviour and personality of each character match to the ones of the originals book

A/N2: I would say, Fang...so yeah...and thx for ur recommendations, they are beautiful

should have kept the happy story

family coming over URGH