Reviews for Final Moments
medella chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Well that was... interesting. Why only two deaths? And you killed off Katie Bell? *le dark angry face* You're dead to meh.

Haha, anyways, good job! I like your prose and your pace! I liked Romilda's oen the most, especially the end because it seemed so poetic :)

Keep writing! Extend it maybe? :)

xx cuteypuffgirl
SergeantLuke chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
What, only two? Surely there must be more untold casualties. I demand an update!