Ooh, this is good! So much angst.
Poor Ichigo, having to hide it all inside but it's understandable how he couldn't tell her how he feels. I hope it was longer, still very good as a one-shot

I love this idea, will you be doing more with it?

I liked the story because you can feel what Ichigo is feeling and all of the intensity.

Ooh. Interesting. I like how you wrote the darker side of the story. Very emotional. Write more!

This is seems like a nice plot~! I really like it:) I hope you make more of these oneshots~!