Reviews for Beast
FayeTheBitch chapter 2 . 4/6/2014
Shooted isn't a word, dumby. It's either 'shot' or sometimes 'pulled the trigger'. And don't you have an English class at all? Or read? A paragraph is 6-8 sentences long. NOT one sentence! And at least TRY to make the reactions seem a LITTLE realistic! I literally skimmed through the first chapter because I thought it was just a common poorly written first chapter, and that the rest would be better. And another thing, I don't want to here you getting all mad at me for being harsh because you know what? This is a review! NOT a written praise for you just because you wrote something. So deal with it! Delete it, I don't care! I just hope you decide to take this review, and use it to drive yourself to learning how to write PROPERLY!
SilverInu93 chapter 32 . 1/27/2014
good story
Jazzy-Booey chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
cool story! Imma read this chapter again!
Zara112358 chapter 22 . 6/7/2013
HI HI HI HI HI HI HI HI HI HI HI HI HI
Zara112358 chapter 18 . 6/7/2013
Amu wins and he becomes her slave and during that time she falls for him
These-Shattered-Bones chapter 31 . 1/27/2013
Good chappy and yea the 'game' is confusing but funny as hell!
These-Shattered-Bones chapter 21 . 1/27/2013
Yes ikuto save your anger for when you come face to face with dark!
Good chappy by de way! :O
These-Shattered-Bones chapter 9 . 1/27/2013
Hum maybe the necklace is a rosary? :)
These-Shattered-Bones chapter 8 . 1/27/2013
Good story the plot is awsome! And ikuto you would die or be turn into a vampire if she drinks your blood! . once again good job! .
AniiMai chapter 5 . 10/8/2011
Where did amaya come from, and who is she o.O
Arkytior's Song chapter 32 . 10/8/2011
CUTE! That was so cute! Loved it!
flyaway213 chapter 32 . 10/6/2011
umm Just so you know, you made Amu 20 years old with a 10 year old kid. :/
cheesecakemonster chapter 14 . 8/29/2011
LOVE YOUR STORY!
AikoV chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
this kind of reminds me of vampire knight
RadicalAnna chapter 32 . 7/30/2011
D: That Was it? '3 iFeel The Strong Urge To go Cry iN A Corner Cant Wait FOr Your Next Story :)
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