|Reviews for New Arrival|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
Hi this sounds like a really interesting story I would love to know what happens
| Fesd5 chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
I really enjoyed this! I love the idea as well.
The only thing I want to ask is can you leave spaces in between the lines so it's easier to read please? But I like the idea. I wanted to write a Pony Whisper story too.
Please continue :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
| Buggy124 chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
I think this is interesting, you should write more to it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
love it but isnt Drummer a gelding
| skewbald girl chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
great realy hope u can add more to it skewbald girlx
| Fateblue chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
It's really good so far, please continue in your writing.
You may want to use " instead of ' though.
Only a few spelling mistakes.
Rating: 3 and 1/2 stars
| fennyfuzz chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
| ranger Lauren chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!
| Tom's Kickass Soldier Wife chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
I love the Pony Whisperer! Shame there isn't a section for it.
I can't wait to read more.
| RogueMustangMare chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Okay, please don't be mad at me; but you did great in the beginning, but after the second sentence where Pia tells Drummer what's going on, you kind of bunched all of the sentences including the character's talking together, and that kind of gets confusing. Other than that, it's great, can't wait for more.
| Dustpelt chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Really good, I love this story, please write more
| Livinginadaydream chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Really good so far.