|Reviews for A Perfect Story|
| ASianSuccessor2012 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
What a beautiful story! :) I love Mary Poppins (her being my most favorite Disney character) and absolutely adore the Mary/Bert pairing. The realism in this chapter really shows the insights on the practically perfect life Mary was living, but wouldn't be so without Bert. Yes, it's true that they had to remain friends because of their recognizably different lifestyles, but one day, I hope they do show those feelings to each other. You are such a splendid writer and I do strongly encourage you to keep on writing! What a talent! This story was practically perfect in every way.
| CallinMeBlondie chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
This was beautiful ) Loved the "that's it?" after the story. Oh my laughed quite a bit at that part! nice work!
| spaciireth chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
N'aww, this is completely adorable! I love the characterisation of the kids, and you added just the right amount of bittersweet to give a bit of a pang, but I was still smiling at the end.
| Darling Pretty chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
My friends always tease me because I always LOVE couples that are doomed to never be together. Mary and Bert are the PERFECT example of this.
I realize that was random, but I wanted you to know that you've captured exactly why they're so freaking tragic. WHY CAN'T THEY JUST SUCK IT UP ALREADY AND BE IN LOVE?
I'm sorry, that looked a little crazy. I have to say, I'm impressed- you managed to make me sad and make me laugh all in one story. Best non-Bert-related lines... "I like Tuesdays!" (mostly just because I laugh at the picture I get in my head) and "Katherine saw a handsome man on a flying white horse, who may or may not have had some wicked tendencies." (mostly because that is exactly what I do when I tell stories to the kids at my work.)
Long story short, I LOVE your story, though of course, I wished for a happy ending (it wouldn't have been as good that way though). Oh, and Mary Poppins needs to get her act together and let herself fall in love with Bert because it's just SILLY to deny herself that happiness! Am I right or am I right?
Well, now that I've convinced you I'm insane, I think I'll take my leave. Do write more please!
| DiscoverAbbey chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Ummm... let's see... I'm looking through a dictionary, but I find myself unable to find words to describe how... AMAZING and CUTE this story was. It was like you put tragedy, cuteness, adorable amazing things togetther in a blender and made a smoothie. A rather good enjoyable smoothie. I loved this story :)