I'm always happy to see into their future.

Wonderful story
Thank you for sharing it with us.

Love this great story. What a ride. One of my favorites to re-read.

Love the story! Romance, suspense, danger, SMART women, sexy, sensitive men and the "Future takes" were terrific!

YOUR Charlie is a LOT more pragmatic and calm than S. M.'s Charlie! Of course the age differences in the two main characters from the originals may have a lot to do with that. S. M.'s Charlie would have taken Edward to the back of beyond and just SHOT his narrow little ass if'n he'd found Edward in Bella's bed, Vampirism be damned! Oh, My, Gosh! Alec and JANE!? I can already tell this will not end well for THAT dastardly pair! Cue the ominous music!

Love It!

Good work

I used to know a compulsive cleaner and she would have never been able to sit on the porch like Bella. I don't mean this as a criticism in any way - simply an observation.

So sweet! I loved going on this ride with Edward and Bella. You created a wonderful story here.

XoxoxoxoX
Alia

You could have made that more drama filled more angst perhaps. I guess it got the story across.

What does he have a wife? I'm so glad I'm reading this as a complete story because that's one hell of a cliffhanger.

Is Jamie James? What happened?

Who is Lily.

This seems interesting!

Hello. Excellent story! I loved every word! Thanks again for entertaining me! Suzan Noerr