Reviews for Torn Outtakes
Lona W. Hall chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Lol...no ewww at all...hot!
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
I'm quite fond of James/Bella as a pairing, and I thought this was hot and really well done. Love to see more.
HopeStreet chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
That was all kinds of gross! Despite the grossness, it was nice to get a look at James' method for making Bella heed his commands. He really used her newborn confusion to his advantage.
SunshineGal3 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Eww! I kid, I kid. While it may be a little hard to read, you're right in that it does explain Bella's behavior later in the story. You did a great job with it!
Luvtwismut chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Thanks for this outtake! It's good to get a better understanding as to why Bella is all confused. That James did quite a number on her! Oh, and this was hot too. Even ifmit was James and not Edward. ;)
kroseph chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Definitely Ewww! I kept rooting for Bella to bite the slime...she could have easily biten it off-that would have been epic!

It is such a dark place and I think all of us who read this feel the wrong in it. Edward must have heard and the hurt he must have felt.

I'm so glad this didn't happen in the books :)

Thanks for the update, feel better soon.