Reviews for When I Close My Eyes
jcnf009 chapter 21 . 3/18
Oh my god! That was so sad! :(
jcnf009 chapter 13 . 3/18
Uh oh! Edward will have an aneurism when he finds out!
jcnf009 chapter 9 . 3/18
I love this Edward! He is incredible sweet with Bella!
jcnf009 chapter 7 . 3/18
Awwwww... This is the sweetest thing ever!
Guest chapter 26 . 12/5/2015
What?! Please finish this. I just read this all the way through not realizing that you don't plan on finishing. Please change your mind. I'm begging you! Please, please!
qwert.riggaloo chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
Ok, I love this story, but you're switching from first person to third person to narrorating in one sentence and it's confusing. I love it though. Awesome plot!
Brandi Neri chapter 11 . 6/1/2015
tease lol
Liz chapter 23 . 5/13/2015
What!? Why would make them get back so easily? After every thing he said and done to her, I know she has her faults but WTF! U don't serially think that's good, I know it's a story but it really was a waist of my time! U should have made him work for it or make her move on 2 someone else and forget his ass!.
Candynamite chapter 25 . 2/27/2015
I need more! Your writing is so funny! And I really want to see how bella and Alice will handle being on lock down!
Guest chapter 26 . 2/23/2015
not fair!
Liz 1974 chapter 26 . 2/21/2015
(Grunts ) fucking cliffhanger
Burp1234 chapter 26 . 12/11/2014
I hope that you can continue to write this story
CallMeJazz chapter 22 . 11/7/2014
Uhm where is bella's parents? are u purposely skipped some details? just asking
CallMeJazz chapter 19 . 11/7/2014
Ugh bella have some pride. Seriously edward is just overreacting he's the one who should do the begging :
CallMeJazz chapter 18 . 11/7/2014
Oh my god edward is such a dramaqueen. he broke up with her over such a little weirdo :p
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