Reviews for When I Close My Eyes
campyrs52 chapter 29 . 6/12
I found this story yesterday! It is so good. I really hope you update soon. Thank you for posting this.
athome Jo chapter 29 . 5/21
Great story! Can't wait to see how it ends!
Guest chapter 29 . 5/14
This is one fantablous story
silversimon chapter 29 . 3/24
Love the true mafia direction the story has taken! Can't hardly wait for the next chapters! Sorry for delayed R&R, no way reflects my intense interest in your story which I've been following for over five years now. And so grateful you began writing and sharing again. :-)

Please pay no regard to naysayers or negative reviews. Unfortunately it seems all authors become targets of the untalented haters at some point, even the most gifted. It boggles my mind as to the flamers supposed reasons. I love your story as do hundreds of others who have your story on alert/favorite.

Keep up the excellent work!
Pattsy1994 chapter 29 . 3/11
Fantastic chapter, well structured, can't wait for more please.
Pattsy1994 chapter 28 . 3/11
Poor Alice, hope they find her soon.
Pattsy1994 chapter 23 . 3/11
I wondered what happened to Charlie, he never came to th hospital to see Bella.
mnnlisa chapter 29 . 2/6
I read all 29 chapters over the weekend and am really enjoying the story. Thank you for sharing.
Veronique24 chapter 29 . 1/31
Love it! Wonder who has Alice?! And why?
sujari6 chapter 29 . 1/23
I hope they get Alice back soon.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/20
ha
Arkansas Sweetheart chapter 23 . 1/13
I really like this story but I hate it when Bella takes him back like nbd...as if he wasn't a cruel prideful ass
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 12 . 1/10
Well done.
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 11 . 1/10
Awesome chapter.
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 10 . 1/10
Awesome chapter
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