|Reviews for Away From the Sun|
| MissYesPleaseSir chapter 2 . 5/2
I know it's been a long time since you posted this, but I want to encourage you to keep going! Your premise is so interesting and your writing a pleasure to read...so don't give it up! I'm dying to see what happens here — there are so many ways you can take this story, so many choices and wrong turns they can all go down from this point... I feel like Alice, unable to se the future bc there are so many decisions (good and bad) that remain to be made. I ripped through the whole of "Once Bitten" yesterday and today and wish there were more to read of "Away from the Sun." Keep it up! :)
| KYCATS7AOL chapter 2 . 4/17
YOU SHOULD FINISH YOUR STORY
| FictionIsMyLifeline chapter 2 . 3/3
I absolutely love this story. You are an incredible writer and while normally I find something to criticize in every fanfiction I read, it was impossible to find a fault in yours. Please continue this, I almost began crying when I saw only two chapters. Much love, and keep on writing,
| kgarrison3 chapter 2 . 12/8/2014
I am glad you are back. You have way with a story!
| allidel chapter 2 . 9/1/2014
I was cleaning up my email & I heard about OBTS from a twilight facebook group...someone was looking for it and I thought it sounded interesting. I opened the story, fully intending to just put it on TBR list. I had this romance/humor story that looked like fun, and was all set up to read that for a bit. Instead, I read a couple of lines of OBTS...and before I knew it, I have now spent the entire day devouring it. Sure I've had to stop to feed the kids and settle a couple of arguments, but other than that I couldn't walk away. I know I should have put this in a review over there, but I had to come check out the sequel. I'm so glad that you are back to working on it, now that I've found it.
I have to say that I absolutely love the story. I love the twist on the supernatural and the characters themselves. You've done an amazing job of keeping them a bit canon, but still blending them seamlessly into your world. It's been so much fun to read. I can't wait to see how E&B and the rest of the Cullens deal with the Volturi. I truly hope that things are better for you. I look forward to hopefully reading more of this wonderful world soon. Thank you for sharing!
| bamagal110 chapter 2 . 8/21/2014
That is a great beginning I loved the first one and I am looking forward to this one I hope you finish it...
| mygooddog chapter 2 . 8/21/2014
It is great, please keep going!
| Camilla10 chapter 2 . 8/5/2014
I reread Onc e bitten and now I am ready for this. Please, don't lose your drive.
| JenSing chapter 2 . 8/3/2014
Hope that you are able to continue with the story. Loved Once bitten and like the take on Bella the Vampire Slayer.
| KristinaFerrara13 chapter 2 . 7/31/2014
wonder what aro is going to do
| EmmaHope070115 chapter 2 . 7/30/2014
Ok the sequel has me hooked do you post else,where because I would like to eead now
| mommakat chapter 2 . 7/29/2014
You did just fine and THANK YOU! Please know you are appreciated and I cannot wait for the next chapter :)
Welcome Back :)
| zeeber chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
I had no idea once bitten twice shy wasn't a complete story...looks like you have more adventure for the two of them...looking forward to reading more...Brenda
| biloxi22 chapter 2 . 7/28/2014
I just read the first part of your story Once Bitten, Twice Shy after finding it on TWCS yesterday. I really enjoyed your first story and am looking forward to reading more.
| hikingurl48 chapter 2 . 7/27/2014
Wow, I feel like I waved a magic wand or wished on a star. Just hours ago I was lamenting that it had been years since an update to this story and suddenly one appears! Thank you. Looking forward to more