|Reviews for The Ones We Carry|
| Ai chapter 3 . 3/5/2016
I know you wrote this forever ago, but I rarely review and felt the need to do so. This fic...it was brilliant. Everything about it was wonderful. And each chapter made me cry for different reasons. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.
| Puggle chapter 3 . 1/16/2014
Thank you for sharing
| librarywitch chapter 3 . 10/25/2013
Oh wow, that is so like Sherlock both in the beginning and the end. Loved it.
| MapleleafCameo chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
This was gorgeous and beautiful and heartbreaking.
Just what I needed.
| Dora-pomidora chapter 3 . 8/21/2013
Ой, какое... печально-красивое! Такая замечательная вещь, спасибо!
| BlackxBlueAngel chapter 3 . 6/23/2013
there's so much intense emotion in this story, i love it. thank you for writing such a beautifully intense story.
| Kazuki Landen chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
Oh, Sherlock's offer had me welling up :(
This whole fic has been traumatic! But also wonderful, thank you. You write them both so well, and you're so so good at the emotional side of things, it's brilliant to read.
| Ju Lara chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
Really I should review all the chapters separately, but I mostly wanted to praise you for a truly amazing roller coaster of an emotional ride. Each chapter evoked particular responses, I found it refreshing to have John standing up for himself whilst retaining his caring role in Sherlock's life. I've just been re reading most of your stories, I love them, so thanks. This one goes very deep in their relationship, I think, especially Sherlock asking John to stay in sight of the cameras.
| Amaranthus chapter 3 . 5/20/2012
That bit about Sherlock helping carry Emily's Memory made me cry. Beautifully written.
| tea and teal chapter 3 . 4/24/2012
You twice gave me the sudden urge to cry in the space of two chapters: "I just stared down at Justin Mathers, realizing he'd been waiting for a friendly face. He hadn't wanted to die alone." ...and... "I promise I won't delete her, I'll keep her forever." Fantastic, thank you.
| Telula13 chapter 3 . 4/8/2012
Holy crap, you are an amazing writer. Seriously every story I read of yours just gets better and better. You are one of my top favorite writers and I can't wait to read more.
| Seftimiu chapter 3 . 1/14/2012
This was beautiful and heartbreaking and provoked tears in me when he offered so sincerely to carry her for John. Wonderful!
| cumberbunchesofoats chapter 3 . 1/11/2012
"I want you to let me carry her, John. For you. You have too many and I never want there to be one because of me."
Gahhhh so wonderful! Loved this story.
| Jjjo chapter 3 . 10/5/2011
I'm actually crying. That was beautiful, and by far the sweetest, Sherlockest thing i've read yet. I love the idea of Sherlock trying to do this for John, and I adore the way you found for him to honestly empathize/mourn for a girl he doesn't know. One definition of a "round" character is one who can surprise the reader without going ooc and unbelievable-your Sherlock did just that. Well done!
| toeki chapter 3 . 8/13/2011
wow. this is well written, though i knew from the first chapter that the killers choice of victims had something to do with the surgeries. the way you write john is amazing, and the slash is so subtle that i could nearly read it as a canon fic.
found some minor errors:
"He'd past through our hospital in pieces."- PASSED instead of PAST here?
"His voice was higher than I expected as he order his Guinness"-orderED
"and the pictures that I'd manage to back up onto the computer were back on the phone"- manageD
"I pointed at my chest to emphasis my point."- emphasisE