|Reviews for Sonic and Yugioh|
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/25
This would be better with grammer and proper English other than that it's all good
| Damian chapter 10 . 11/11/2014
please put a sequel on cause i would like it.
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/6/2014
(Well technically three.)
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/5/2014
YOU NEED A SEQUAL
| ALivingDream chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
Where Do I begin...?
I'm so lost...I'm sorry, but I am...I.I.I.I can't read this...
I read until this chapter in faith that the Grammar would get better...and the story lay out will get better...but...No, I can't...I'm so sorry...
Also...what is a Sperit?
| KittyKat5090 chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
wtf i dont understand yugioh so why the hell am i reading this
| Xkarz Ravensin chapter 6 . 7/29/2011
ur errors are really bothering me
GODDAMMIT I SOUND LIKE A FUCKIN TEACHER!*bangs head against desk*
| Xkarz Ravensin chapter 5 . 7/24/2011
Nothiin' else to say except to fix the errors
| Xkarz Ravensin chapter 3 . 7/24/2011
1) You have a lot of errors
2) I cant judge correctly since its been a long time since I've watched Yu-Gi-Oh! but I'll do my best.
...Why is it whenever I review your story I sound like a FUCKIN' TEACHER?
| Xkarz Ravensin chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
oooh...yugioh...thats been aa while