Reviews for Ashes and Cinders
midnightwhispers27609 chapter 1 . 3/16
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I hate roller coasters too! :'( their too scary. what if it got off track?! how dangerous would that be?!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
The Shining Sprite chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Oh my gawd. At this very moment, I am reading this on my cell phone while in line for the most notorious roller coaster in Disneyland: Space Mountain. For some reason, after reading this, I feel motivated to not scream at all and beat Len's vow of silence. Geez, wish me luck...

But anyway, GREAT story. The fluff was so fluffy like the cotton candy I just finished eating! :D
Clavemien Nigram Rosa chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
Haha, poor Len.

Cute by the way
Kiyutsuna chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Oh my goodness! The ending was epic! XDDD

I wonder how they could even get the chance to hold a conversation nevermind kiss on that thing, I've been on rollarcoasters before and all I could do was sit there, get whippedd around, scream, and hope for the ride to be over without much coherent thought...

Len must be either really levelheaded or he's just lost it. 8D
KFG24 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
You're afraid of ~roller coasters~? Bwahaha- No, I'm kidding. I hate those things. DX

I've only ridden one(a small one after years of being afraid of those rides)and I liked it, but those really big ones you see - especially the ones that do like, loops and go upside down and what not - you will ~never~ see me on one of those unless I've been offered a large sum of money and have a trusted friend(or a hated enemy to puke on)in the seat next to me. x,x

Anyways, Len is so cute, trying to find Rin's weakness and exploit it so he can have a romantic moment with her! Oh wait, that doesn't make him cute. That makes him seem kinda *sshole-ish. But he was cute in the end, so it's okay! _

Although(if his plan had succeeded)the meal ticket was kinda asking for it when she stopped feeding Len... Though that's(literally)another story!
Oceannyan chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Once again, I love it.

I like tsundere Len, too! :)

And a oneshot collection idea is ingenius.
Evil-Chibi-Tiffy chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Sooo cute! Plz plz plz update soon! :D
ChocoCookieFuck chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Aaw, that's not that embarrassing. D: ! When I was younger I used to be afraid of heights, so I was was afraid of roller coasters but now... well in April I went to Florida and lets just say that the Hulk ride is AWESOME. *w*

Anywaaay, this oneshot. YES. 8D
Campanella chapter 1 . 7/3/2011

Your one shots are the best 3 I can't wait for more! I hate roller coasters too, but after I went to Knotts, I got over my fear. But Knotts roller coasters are friggin scary DX
MizukawaYuki chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
This is funny! thank god he didn't bite his own tongue during the kiss. Don't blame Miku for her incorrect information, Len. It's your own fault for want to know your fearless girlfriend weakness. Lol

I love roller coster! Never tried the universal singapore one, it does look scary though.
missrinkagamine chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
haha im TERRIFIED of heights D: thats y i never take window seats on a plane... wut wuz with the random miku at the end?
Chikanpo chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Ooooh, a oneshot collection from you eh? Looking forward to more!

I liked this one, it was funny xD I think making Len afraid instead was a good way to do it. As for roller coasters... Personally, I like them, but I hate going to amusement parks and things like that cause of the things people do on roller coasters... Lets just say I have a stupid irrational fear and be done with it xD

I'm looking forward to the fairytale thing (lol, I typed thong at first)! Can't wait for more!