|Reviews for The Convict & The Loyalist|
| MatsuokaKiran chapter 4 . 2/5
wow that was a really good story. characters felt natural and were written well, stayed in line with what i would expect them to act like.
i have to say, i like it when romance builds and evolves, and the characters evolve with it. this is one of those stories where the build up is done well, and just makes it that much better.
i really enjoyed this, and i think you have more jack x miranda stories? i hope they are just as awesome, and pick up where you left off... you know, so we can have more romance
| electric gurrl chapter 4 . 1/18
This was excellent. Very IC and well written.
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 3 . 8/4/2014
The strange moment after reading so many Miranda and Jack P.O.V fics that you harbor irrational hatred for Shepherd.
| Riptide Monzarc chapter 4 . 4/8/2014
I really like how Shepard's been in the background for most of the story, but she comes out here just a little bit, to meddle in her own way. I still haven't decided if she fucked Jack just to clarify the situation between Jack and Miranda. The story feels complete at this point, but still leaves the reader wanting more. Both Miranda and Jack are different by the end of it, but they're still recogniseable, still true to the characters.
Thanks for sharing!
| Riptide Monzarc chapter 3 . 4/8/2014
Not much to say that I (and others) haven't already said; some very compelling developments for Miranda here, and Jack turning the tables and getting even was really interesting. Neither of them wants to care about the other, or about anything, really. I guess I'll see how that pans out in the next chapter!
| Riptide Monzarc chapter 2 . 4/7/2014
A really excellent take on an alternative loyalty mission! It's fitting that it leaves Jack unsatisfied, and it's really interesting that Miranda's chosen to exercise her leverage and her curiosity in quite that way over the psychotic biotic.
The action was exciting and the love scene was engaging. Very impressive work!
| Riptide Monzarc chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
A lot of delicious tension between our two protagonists, which hews nicely to canon while also giving us quite a bit of insight into both of their psyches and motivation. I'm looking forward to seeing the non-canon mission! And the contrast between how the two deal with emotion is a particularly nice insight-Jack's comfort zone is rage, while Miranda dismisses anger as a distraction. That's the perfect encapsulation of the difference between these two women, one cold and calculating and the other spontaneous, fueled by her pain. They're both haunted by pasts they had no hand in shaping, running from ghosts...and at least part of their mutual animosity might come from just how similar they are, despite appearances.
You've got me hooked!
| Yuri-hime chapter 4 . 1/2/2014
| AmityN7 chapter 4 . 8/30/2013
An incredibly good story. One of my favorites if not my favorite.
While I didn't like how mean you made Shepard it's still refreshing to see a new take on the commander. The highlight of this story is how well you did Miranda and Jack.
Your sex scenes were also well done. Instead of making them pornographic each one felt like it was needed for the plot.
You should feel proud of this story. Nice work.
| jay357 chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
"Miranda half expects the woman (biologically)"
OMFG I had to laugh so hard at that :D
And just so you know, I love your story! :D
| Spiritwolf71 chapter 4 . 10/11/2012
This is prehaps one of the best stories I have read, I love the way you captured Miranda and Jack and I love the build up. It's just to bad that there was nothing after that. Great work.
| lumberjacklife chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
I really like this! But it would be nice if the chapters were shorter. (easier to read that way)
| Madanoch chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
Wow...just wow, that was an amazing read. You capture these two perfectly, a relationship between them would not be a rushed and simple thing by any means. The part about Jack submitting her poem to a publishing site really got me, it was very sad thinking of how she just wanted a slight bit of acceptance and did so by putting her work out for everyone to see. This was very thought out and well done, keep up the good work.
| ThrottaKaze chapter 4 . 5/14/2012
This is AMAZING. My God please continue, it's fantastic. I love these two together and you write them so delightfully well. I haven't encountered such a convincing renegade shep and you've made that happen. Seriously going to be keeping an eye on this, it's great. Please continue!
| General Maraxus chapter 4 . 4/12/2012
Loved this from start to finish :D Great story!