|Reviews for Sunshine and Fire|
| Scarlet Rabbit chapter 5 . 8h ago
I'm kinda surprised that the inquisitor didn't question her cutie mark, it doesn't seem like it happens often.
I think you did fine with the bits of information and the interrogation. Celestia didn't seem all that grim.
| Scarlet Rabbit chapter 4 . 9h ago
Brightsmile is just a horny little thing. I laughed at how all the ponies where reacting to Twilight and Spike
| Scarlet Rabbit chapter 3 . 10h ago
Poor Brainy. Prison is one thing, he doesn't deserve this
| Scarlet Rabbit chapter 2 . 10h ago
Damn I would hate to have to walk through that, that just shows how strong willed Twilight is.
Ya I'm sure Spike is just as pleasant smelling.
What a nice pony to save them
| Scarlet Rabbit chapter 1 . 10h ago
Well at least Twilight had some fun before that guy rudely interrupted it.
That was pretty smart of Celestia to take stock of the situation. I wonder why Luna didn't do it.
| Aotrs Commander chapter 16 . 3/3
An interesting take on dragons, so different from the usual draconic nation I've seen done before. I rather like it actually (it certainly seems to tally with what we've seen of them outside of Spike.)
Keep up the good work!
| LurkerLordX chapter 16 . 3/3
it's a trap! quick luna do a barrel roll and get away from Nightmare Dragon
| Ninth Tail chapter 1 . 3/3
This is such a phenomenal story. Your writing style is absolutely beautiful, and I'm definitely hooked.
| thebluninja chapter 15 . 2/20
"It was just another way of running away." - Sometimes you're running away, and sometimes you're running towards. Luna needs to find the second.
" I think we've for dragons!" - Huh what huh?
| Alamandorious chapter 15 . 2/19
Woot! Another chapter, and a cool one at that! Keep up the good work!
| LurkerLordX chapter 15 . 2/19
We're going bac in tiiiiime wo wo wo wa wa, going back in tiiime. Hum huge shadow dragon and a magic rock...calling it now the black dragon is AU Luna
| james chapter 1 . 1/21
I like it
| amber chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
| thebluninja chapter 14 . 8/28/2013
Well, this is pretty good, and I really hope that the next chapter will appear in a good interval. I'm lucky with my ability to write at work, so here's hoping you can shift back to a position where you can at least jot down ideas in a notebook! This fic well deserves the hundreds of follows.
| thebluninja chapter 12 . 8/28/2013
"In Everfree City, the Queen is wherewhere." - Whatwhat?
"oodles of bad expository dialogue " - Oh no, this isn't bad. I don't think I could possibly label it as lower than mediocre.
"which part of the plan do you think will go wrong first?" - All of it? :D