Reviews for The Unknown Being
wolf76265 chapter 3 . 7/7/2011
I really hope that the cullans can help bella but I don't think they can and I think that edward really screwed up when he left bella and it's said that the little girl is the only one that is going to be in the middle of all the things that seem to be going on. I hope you update soon.
MissTeenageDream chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
Another great chapter! I'm hoping since there is going to be enough drama with Edward having left Bella pregnant and her now being a stripper on drugs that his "flings" won't be too much trouble.
Mei fa-chan chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
ardana chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
I am intrigued with where you are going with this. I can't wait for the family's reaction to Peyton and Edward's reaction to the whole situation.
Edward's Baby Bella chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
is your chapter beta'd because there is alot of is a different story and i'm enjoying it so far.
MaryKitty chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
Great chapter
melissamary55 chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
just love it and cant wait to read about edward reaction update soon
Kgunter34 chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
Great update.
brittany86 chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
cant wait for more
serena83 chapter 2 . 7/6/2011
Its good please update soon :)
MissTeenageDream chapter 2 . 7/6/2011
Really great story so far! I can't wait for more!
sujari6 chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
Bella's on drugs so is this why she didn't recognise Jasper?
melissamary55 chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
love it update soon and cant wait to read about edward reaction when he finds out and bella
brittany86 chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
cant wait to find out y she didnt know it was jazz
Kgunter34 chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
Great update.
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