Reviews for The Unknown Being
frostedglaze chapter 15 . 8/9/2011
This is so infuriating and unfair. After all the crap she had to endure, because of Edward' stupidity, while he was whoring his way around the world and having fun, she is the one who dies? Well bleep what about her happiness. It suck that Edward now gets everything he wanted. And how dare Alice tell him to move on from Bella. Honestly the Cullens' are at fault for everything that has happened to Bella, and yet they suffer no repercussions,instead they get an ungrateful little brat who is very much Edwards's daughter. They both love hurting Bella.
Nat3628 chapter 15 . 8/9/2011
So is Bella dead? And Edward is going to go kill himself and leave his little girl without a parent.
twilight1alice chapter 15 . 8/9/2011
That was a great chapter, I can't wait for more
MaryMary123 chapter 15 . 8/9/2011
I knew it :(
Kgunter34 chapter 15 . 8/9/2011
The eiplogue, already? Great update. I hope this works out.
OurFamily chapter 14 . 8/8/2011
OMG...

No Bella... Please let her live.
Nat3628 chapter 14 . 8/8/2011
I guess both of them are feeling pain b/c of Bella's condition. I wonder what Edward's mother will have to say to him and who the other figure is-is it Bella-like her spirit form or something?
brown eyed lover chapter 14 . 8/8/2011
this chapter was really good cant wait for more peoplr update today\tomorrow ~much love xx
pmk kelly chapter 14 . 8/7/2011
Loved it
MissTeenageDream chapter 14 . 8/7/2011
Great chapter!
Hope Edwards chapter 14 . 8/7/2011
Great story cant wait to read more
Kgunter34 chapter 14 . 8/7/2011
Great update.
liela-k chapter 14 . 8/7/2011
omg i cant wait im freaking out i wish the chaps were longer but they are awsome as is. keepem comin please im going crazy.
pmk kelly chapter 14 . 8/7/2011
Loved it
melissamary55 chapter 14 . 8/7/2011
love it and will bella survive update soon
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