Reviews for Help Mii
ComedyMaster333 chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Good story, but how would he just randomly fall into a cart and someone start controlling him? The chapters are kind of short, and I noticed that you haven't updated in at least 5 months. Realise is spelled "Realize," because they both have different meanings. Get a person to check your story, I found several grammatical and spelling errors.
Dark Mind of the American Teen chapter 2 . 10/9/2011
A story about a Mii..I ever thought it would happen ;)
Zombieboy411 chapter 2 . 8/3/2011
I like your story. Plz read and review mine. BTW don't mind the little kid who wrote the first review. At least your name doesn't show that you like TV shows for little girls.
HawkfrostsAvenger chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
xD What an interesting concept :3 I've always wondered what it would be like to be a Mii lol
w00t chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
wow this is amazing, make more please, i

beg you as a mii

character fanatic, and dont listen to

the asshole who

called it lame!
Puritina chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
OMG this is really good. Continue it. I think it's pretty interesting, maybe in the next chapter you will tell how this person got sucked into the game and if this person is a boy or girl. Anyways good job oh and for the story, I hate tp be the punctuation police but whey you said, How did I get here, you didn't put the question mark at the end.

Puritina
IceCreamLol chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
LAME