|Reviews for The Escape of the Hitachiin's maid!|
| Chocochip-chan chapter 7 . 3/31/2013
oh my goodness woman update soon.
| Taegycats2000 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
love it love it love it
| taegycats2000 chapter 7 . 1/5/2012
i love this story update soon plz
| Rufescent chapter 7 . 1/1/2012
That...was epic. And sad.
Oh, wow, I am really happy you updated. This chapter is amazing and a great length!
I wonder who the unlikely source is...
Update soon, please!(Happy 2012, by the way)
| Dream Of Rose Petals chapter 6 . 8/20/2011
This story just gets better and better! I really really want to know what happens next! :D
| Starlightx21 chapter 6 . 8/20/2011
Very nicely done, i can see how one problem has leads to another, who would have ever thought a childish game could bring down a whole company!But i can't blame the twins i mean they were just kids.
And who would have thought Kaoru had such a dark side hidden within, this has really got me thinking i hope you upadte soon!
| falloutboy chapter 6 . 8/20/2011
omg this story is sooooooooo good and dramatic! please update!:DDD
| GatewaysDiary chapter 5 . 8/11/2011
Wa? No, poor little Kaoru baby, getting backed into the corner by the mean lady! Eh, it's a good things that Hikaru pushed like he did for them to go look for his brother. I can't believe Tamaki was being so mean about it though. *Sighs* I loved the way you have been writing the maid (Does that seem evil of me?) But it really is a good version of her. Somewhat charming, with a sickly sweet innocent side that conceals her true nature, the same way she is depicted in the anime(Manga) I can't believe that she wanted the twins to take the fall for her! She already ruined their lives, that isn't enough for her? Hmp, guess not.
I feel so bad for the twins, what she said was cold, figure she would say something like that. I really hope that their father isn't to hard on the twins, I don't think they can take to much more right now.
I loved the ending line. Pretty much sums up the story, everything should be simple, but nothing is ever really simple. Just getting his phone and in return his whole world was turned upside down and inside out.
Anyways, hope to see more again soon. Still much love!
| TrixieTheEvilPixie chapter 5 . 8/11/2011
I love it! Update soon!
| Rufescent chapter 5 . 8/11/2011
"... All Kaoru wanted was his phone..." - - I love this line! Oh, well, destiny is a funny thing.
Great chapter! Keep it up, and I hope an update comes soon. Good luck !
| falloutboy chapter 4 . 8/10/2011
OHMYGOD! what if she hurts kaoru! i hope hikaru comes! please UPDATE! :)
| TrixieTheEvilPixie chapter 4 . 8/9/2011
This was AMAZING! Update soon!
| GatewaysDiary chapter 4 . 8/9/2011
Haha, I love the episode reference at the beginning, although I liked episode 21, better then episode 22, but that is mainly cause the twins were more focal in that episode. As well as the fact that I like Halloween better then Samurai, but hey they were all(More or less) good.
Moving on . . .
Wish I could say I recognized the references but they are a little off my radar, the only person I could think of when I saw the Twins cosplay was Kenshin Humura, but that is just my opinion.
Play fight, I wouldn't be lying if I said I would have enjoyed watching that skit. Not so much the "Brotherly Love" they added in afterwards but the actual sword play would have been cool, especially with them being twins. Since twins always make the best enemies (and I speak from experiences)
I liked the bit about subtle hints. With Hikaru and Kaoru both thinking back to what Kaoru said to him about Haruhi, and the fact that she is doing it to them. All the references you make back to the show really help it feel more authentic to the show.
Kaoru shouldn't have went back by himself. . . poor baby. I don't know why I feel like I need to say that, maybe because the lady has a sword in her hand, or maybe cause I just want en excuse to hug Kaoru. . .*Thinks about it* Most likely the second one.
I am so happy with the way this is moving along, I hope to see a new update for it soon!
| GatewaysDiary chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
Aw, I loved this. It is very true to the show. I am so excited to see where the next chapter takes it. I really liked this part with the Shadow king and the twins.
"You know, senpai, you're not the heartless jerk you try and convince people you are. It's ok that you want to act without being heartless once in a while." That statement sounded so similar to what Haruhi had said to Kyoya before; to hear those words leaving Kaoru's mouth was a shock but never the less. Kaoru was rather wise despite his foolish ways and there was no denying that.
Which now that I think about it, it seems kind of stupid quoting you your own words, but I really did love that part!
Anyways to avoid this review getting repetitive I will stop typing now and await the next chapter!
| Paula-Ana chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
Your summary of the next chapter left me in suspense! hurry !1!