Reviews for Makuahine
Guest chapter 22 . 9/28
love the story can you writee anither chapter with more steve and him geting hurt and thhe williams parents x
love it
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 22 . 6/11
I never really did like Jameson. Always though she was sneaky.

Loved Danny parents and how well they fit in with the team. And Mrs. Williams adopting Steve.
Jmeldono chapter 3 . 6/8
I'm so loving this story! Its awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16
This is such a charming story! Bromance for Danny and Steve is so much fun! I love how the Williams family has adopted Steve into their midst! And you can so see how much it meant to Steve, too!
R.U. Lisnin chapter 22 . 8/26/2013
REALLY AWESOME! Loved mamma Williams! Really good job! Now I'm going to read the other ones!
Mari21763 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Just finished ch. 1. I always thought Mrs. Williams was Italian (she's Italian in my Fic "gravy" as well) :) Love it so far!
Mari217 chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
Bravo. As an Italian from NJ (who grew up 1 block from Newark) I'm on Ch 2 and I love Mrs. W. :) Love that Grace calls her Nonna (Will be my title some day). Please write more with Mrs. W. :)
MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
I know this probably odd but McGarrett's Marquis is a 1974
Lidil chapter 22 . 2/20/2012
Wo Fat is one scary dude.

What happens next for our intrepid duo?
Lidil chapter 3 . 2/20/2012
Oh, angel.

I can't breathe I'm laughing so hard.

Veronica Williams is a hoot.

And I can' wait to read more.
MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams chapter 22 . 2/15/2012
Gear's Girl chapter 22 . 11/12/2011
Brilliant and masterful writing!
Runner043 chapter 12 . 10/30/2011
Just letting you know that I'm enjoying your story.

Mrs. Williams is such a funny character.
conformityissuicide chapter 22 . 9/17/2011
It took me awhile to finally find the time to read the last two chapters of this story, but they were great! Though you left so much of the ending wide open! Do you plan on writing a sequel? I really enjoyed reading this story; I'm sad to see Danny's mom go! Hope to see some more stories from you soon :)
sparra-music chapter 22 . 9/17/2011
Congratulations on a job well done- you inserted this into canon seemlessly! And I loved the whole thing.

Can't wait to see the next adventure with the senior Williamses! Oh, and i think someone should take this opportunity to tease Steve for getting along so well with his mother-in-law (since they're always saying S&D are like and old married couple).

But, I think it would have been funny if Steve whipped the sling off as soon as he got back to the car from dropping Mrs. Williams at the airport. I loved that you had him tell Danny, "Then we should be arguing." LOL!

Keep up the good work!
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