|Reviews for Occam's Razor|
| ex-McAbbyGirl chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
Gosh, that was adorable.
| MayDayGirl-Save-Our-Ships chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Ooo! I loved this one! I just love the tense atmosphere between them in your stories, especially when they are just starting their friendship.
"but if nothing else it was a lot of fun to press her buttons. Figuratively, of course. Doing that literally could result in some kind of explosion for all she knew." THIS line. I couldn't stop laughing.
And I love the Machiavellian philosophy you added in, very appropriate. Although I don't know much about it, I love philosophy, so I should probably learn more about it.
And the ending apology Chell got out of GLaDOS was perfect and totally in character- although, you know that. I haven't seen you write GLaDOS out of character yet. And what Chell said about the apology: "I'll go first, just so you see it isn't lethal." had me laughing XD
| tardistrekkie chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
I really liked this story :) I think you captured GLaDOS very well. I look forward to reading more of your stories!
| Righteousham chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
This was a powerful piece of fiction that you've written. Your writing is strong and it's clear that you have a talent and practice regularly. I see no spelling or significant grammatical errors, which is big plus. Your story flows well, is competently structured and was a joy to read. I appreciate your ability to stick to canon characterization while expanding said characters in a realistic and often poignant way. Good work and believe me I shall be checking out your other Portal stories as well.
| Dimension3500 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Forget that moron, for so long I've waited for a 'hug scene' between these two! YAY! Another amazing piece of work, keep it up!
| QuillandPen chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
I really enjoyed this story. Your characterization of GLaDOS is spot-on. I could almost hear her voice in my head as I was reading the story. Well done!
| Liber-T.E.A chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Another sweet oneshot! You're really good at these!
| Hal44 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Very nice and emotional. Explains lots of things, to be honest.
| Mystic 777 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
"I'll go first so you see it isn't lethal." (cracks up)
I love it. Short and simple. It would make sense for GLaDOS to realize that not ALL the people she killed were guilty of mistreating her. Thanks for sharing this.
| Wedjat chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Best portrayal of GLaDOS I've ever read. I always try to do my best, but you've out done me for sure! :) I loved this story, and I loved how it was a realistic way for Chell and GLaDOS to interact in a 'friendly' way, some that I've read are far too nice, haha. We all know GLaDOS is too stubborn to be completely nice.
Anyway, thanks for writing this, it was a treat. Happy 4th of July to you too!
| Kashira1786 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
I love your insight into GLaDOS and Chell's friendship. I think you nailed GLaDOS' voice. I also wish there were more GLaDOS-Chell apology fics because Wheatley's not the only one who did wrong.
Can't wait to see any other stories you write!
| FeeptheNinja chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Awwww. I really like all your Chell/GLaDOS stories, and this one's no different.
I love how you write GLaDOS! It just sounds right. You're much better at it than me... :)
| Josh Spicer chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Yay! Friendship! *highfives random other oddly drawn cartoon character while a rainbow appears behind us*
You always make GLaDOS humanish while retaining her machination, which is hard, but you manage to do it really well.
Don't stop writing! :)
| PotterPhantomKitten chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Aww, that was a sweet GLaDOS-Chell friendship thing, FP! I love how GLaDOS was so reluctant to say she was sorry that she only said pretty much the bare minimum of the apology! :)
Also, I love when GLaDOS said "Perish the thought!" for some reason, she reminded me of Shakespeare!
| HoovyWeaponsGuy chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Amazing read as always. c: Made my day seeing a new story from you. Keep up the great work. c: