Reviews for Promise
Guest chapter 4 . 11/3/2015
Great story! I enjoy alot reading this, and fun-fact, 5 million credits is a million and five hundreds USD in real life. Heh.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/25/2015
No more chapter ** ?
NETGamer99 chapter 6 . 9/16/2015
Hey! Please update soon! Great read and it gives me a few ideas when I start writing. Oh, there area few grammatical errors in the past chapters and in this one too, but its just because of rushing and not serious (I hope). Thank you again!
Guest chapter 6 . 5/31/2015
Seems to be a decent start any future updates?
Niky-Slade chapter 6 . 4/23/2015
I can't wait for another update! This is perfect!
HornedGoddess chapter 6 . 3/28/2015
To be honest, I'm not a big halo fan. I really only like it for these two. And your writing has made me like halo even more. I love what you have done with the story. I hope they end up doing more intimate things together:D thanks for this amazing story. I think this should be canon
Rory chapter 6 . 3/14/2015
I think you owe it to your readers if you cannot continue the story. it seems promising and the opportunity for character development is abundant. Please notify readers if you cannot continue
Anon chapter 6 . 2/28/2015
Not sure if would really even be able to think about looking away from a bent over naked cortana nor would she laugh at him for staring
ILoveMasterChief chapter 6 . 2/24/2015
They're so cute together!
Abyss Prime chapter 6 . 2/3/2015
This is quite lovely! Keep up the good work!
Salmiakkikarkki chapter 6 . 1/24/2015
You have 300 followers, so please make really many people happy and update! :)
Nirvash77 chapter 6 . 12/9/2014
This story is just priceless. You need to keep this up big time. I keep laughing at all the back and forth shenanigans. Just make sure you make it funny for the "love scene" since neither of them have had sex. LMAO
LOLCAT254 chapter 6 . 11/30/2014
How long until next chapter?
Heat in Freezing chapter 6 . 10/31/2014
This chapter is better than your other chapters, definitely higher quality. Super cute, I like me some fluff. Basically live for it. Thank you soooo much!
Heat in Freezing chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
I'm a John/Cortana writer and I was writing my story and decided I wanted to take a break and read some stuff, so I'm glad I stumbled upon your story! Really excited to keep reading. :)
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