Reviews for Promise
Disney fan5 chapter 6 . 7/16
will there be more plus I love chief and cortana relationship in this story and in the games
Disney fan5 chapter 5 . 7/16
I love this
Disney fan5 chapter 4 . 7/16
aww cute
Disney fan5 chapter 2 . 7/16
a human cortana cool
Disney fan5 chapter 1 . 7/16
rule one never EVER piss off a Spartan especially if its chief
Disney fan5 chapter 3 . 7/16
omgggggg the feels at the end
Guest chapter 4 . 11/3/2015
Great story! I enjoy alot reading this, and fun-fact, 5 million credits is a million and five hundreds USD in real life. Heh.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/25/2015
No more chapter ** ?
NETGamer99 chapter 6 . 9/16/2015
Hey! Please update soon! Great read and it gives me a few ideas when I start writing. Oh, there area few grammatical errors in the past chapters and in this one too, but its just because of rushing and not serious (I hope). Thank you again!
Guest chapter 6 . 5/31/2015
Seems to be a decent start any future updates?
Niky-Slade chapter 6 . 4/23/2015
I can't wait for another update! This is perfect!
HornedGoddess chapter 6 . 3/28/2015
To be honest, I'm not a big halo fan. I really only like it for these two. And your writing has made me like halo even more. I love what you have done with the story. I hope they end up doing more intimate things together:D thanks for this amazing story. I think this should be canon
Rory chapter 6 . 3/14/2015
I think you owe it to your readers if you cannot continue the story. it seems promising and the opportunity for character development is abundant. Please notify readers if you cannot continue
Anon chapter 6 . 2/28/2015
Not sure if would really even be able to think about looking away from a bent over naked cortana nor would she laugh at him for staring
ILoveMasterChief chapter 6 . 2/24/2015
They're so cute together!
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