Reviews for Not Normal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Did you mean to say Mrs. Perks was helping plan Ron's wedding dinner or should that have been Mrs. Bell? |
![]() ![]() ![]() man, everyone in this story is acting like thats not a disgusting thing to to to ginny. "yeah youre gonna have to be naked even in private because we like it" and "yeah youre probably gonna have to have a kid even if you dont want it" like id imagine at least harry and hermione would be disgusted by this. |
![]() ![]() I hate the word cliffie! You sound like some fool gamer sitting in their mothers basement. Or are you? Please don't use that stupid word again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it feels like harry doesn't have any fun times |
![]() ![]() there is nothing to this except dialog and even that is stale and lacking. Its so incredibly empty. you have to imagine pretty much everything yourself and compared to any decent piece of fanfiction this is just bad. |
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![]() ![]() Don't bother reading. It's a waste. Inconsistent, word bloated, poor execution of some interesting ideas and plot devices. |
![]() ![]() So sad, every long story by this author hits a point where they forget what has already been written and start to contradict it as the story progresses. Not even going to waste the extra time to point it all out, you either notice or don't. |
![]() ![]() I really hate it when authors have Harry give his share away. yes it's kind, but it's also naively stupid. usually in the story, Harry knows he has a fight or war coming, he's depicted as being more mature and intelligent than a typical child, he has at least one advisor he actually listens to, yet no one ever points (in most stories) how that money can be put to better use and still accomplish the charity. |
![]() ![]() This is different than previously stated: Token Muggle Borns were admitted into the government without regard to their connections. One such was Hermione. It was stated that she was betrothed and stuck as a shop worker and babies as her shop owner husband did not want her working otherwise. |
![]() ![]() It's interesting that intentionally or not the girls in this story are also sex slaves just as in harem wars. The girls are immediately indoctrinated into same sex , given no choice or alternatives, given to older girls exclusively, and in the case of Hufflepuff forced to stay in the older younger category and occasionally "allowed " to make their own bed choice for a night. Pretty sure it's called grooming and brainwashing now. |
![]() ![]() despite some criticism , i love that the author researches their background and motivations. and while excessively wordy at times trying to provide decent reasoning for what would otherwise be jkr level plot. |
![]() ![]() "Now as I understand it, the intimacy I can provide may be enough provided they do the other bits by themselves," There is only one "bit" that a guy can't do that a girl can, so obviously the girls haven't had a real "talk" just a "girl sex" talk. Can't blame the administration on that, i wouldn't want 11 year olds through older knowing that either in their situation especially at a boarding school with almost no supervision of worth. |
![]() ![]() Oh and that's just crap that boys can't do as well. The girls are literally getting 24/7 education with one one mentorship with someone who has years of experience. That's like saying a girl can't do as well as a guy (if the guys had the same problem and it is a problem) when compared because he had 4 years of experience and it was her first time. |
![]() ![]() Just pure torture that is. On one hand it's nice to be informed and trusted especially building a relationship. On the other hand...well probably same hand is all he'll get help with for at least a year. While it's a horribly one sided issue, it at least sounds legit as the author ties it in to the reproductive growth differences between males and females. Like an over balanced (or exaggerated) compensation from mother nature, I give you pain and/or discomfort plus hormones plus magic for 5 to 7 days every 28ish days...so have a lot of orgasms on me! SMH |