|Reviews for Under the pouring rain|
| Too bad chapter 1 . 3/24
Too bad you didnt continue this!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
That was sexy and hot.
Definetly captured the playful and wicked Elizabeth with John.
Perfect and Hot Sparky
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Loved it. Perfect. Please how about a second chapter and include the shower. Lol. Thank you.
| black widow mistress chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
I LOVED IT! I ship these two so hard when it comes to Atlantis and just AHHHH LOVED IT! _ epic story is epic :D
| darkfinder chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
great stuff where chapter 2 with the shower .