Reviews for A Twisted Cinderella Story
Aoi Kiryuu chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
Idk if I'm supposed to laugh or not but its interesting and in a way funny! Looking forward to reading your next chapter *click on next chapter*
flower girl chapter 15 . 8/21/2013
so so nice and cute 3
blackscales101 chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Loved the storie! I hope you do more soon:)
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 12 . 9/15/2012
WTF DIAM! WHEEZE! I'M GONNA KILL YOU BOTH FOR FORCED MIDORIKAWA USED THE WEDDING DRESS! Which I don't mind but WHY MUST THEM BOTH! Sigh, but the end it's still HiroMidori! :3 But wait a minute, what about Diam and Wheeze that forced Midorikawa wear the wedding dress?
Hikari: There's said 'break time', isn't?
Not explain the detail where those both went off.
Hikari: He he, gomen.
How 'bout your feelings Hikari? When Gazelle married with Burn?
Hikari: Of course happy, they're meant for each other.
Your sister say it.
Gazelle: Shut up, lazy bun!
Hey! sigh, I'll defeat him sooner or later. Update, update, update! XDDDD
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 15 . 9/14/2012
Ow a good happy ending! :D anyway, *gulp* I can't imagine how big Gazelle voice when he shout at when they tried to explain... It sends me one hundred million electric shock! Anyway, I really, really love the ending! Anyway, did Suruno and Hiromi their adopted children? O.O
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 14 . 9/14/2012
What the- since when Burn sat such romantic sentences? And who love the part Hiroto knocked his head? ME! And that Hitomiko. Urgh! I felt wanna murder her. Shi! Help me for torturing her!
Shi: I can't.
WHY!
Shi: Because she didn't murder Princess Hikari nor her brother.
At least she kidnapped their BEST FRIEND!
Shi: Oh right. Shall we?
LET'S! Anyway, good chappie! :D BYE!
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 13 . 9/14/2012
Pfft! Bwahahahahahaa!
Burn: (red vein pops out)
Hahahahahaa! Owie... Khe khe... What a funny- Hahahahaa! Burn scared! Hahahahahaa!
Burn: SHUT UP!
Haha! But what letter that you got?
Burn: It's-
Nah don't say that.
Burn: (MORE red vein pops out)
Anyway, nice chapter! Update update update! XD
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 11 . 8/23/2012
what the hell! Hiroto married Gazelle, and Burn married Midorikawa! What is it in that Kira's head! Anyway, what wedding dress that you wore?
Gazelle: shut up! (blush)
There, there ya go again. Update please! X33
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 10 . 8/23/2012
So this is the prove of my bad feelings; Gazelle's glass shoe fitted to Midorikawa-
Shi: Geez, I think girls these days...
Keeve and Ulvida: Hey! what was that supposed to be mean
Shi: nothing! (swung her hand instead pushed Hikari(Suzuno Hikari) to Shadow)
Hikari: Eep! (fall on Shadow and they kiss)
Shi: (stares in shock)
Hikari and Shadow: (blushed madly)
Shi: Yamino Kageto... (glared in dark aura)
Shadow: (broke the kiss) That wasn't my fault! (run away)
Shi: GET BACK HERE! (chased him)
Sheesh, over protective guardian. Continue update then!
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 9 . 8/23/2012
Uke and uke, seme to seme. Why I feel bad feeling on this? I mean at the sentences, "The owner will always get back his shoe." Seriously I feel B-A-D F-E-E-L-I-N-G-S on it! Anyway, dammit Hiroto just married with your Midori-chan already!
Midorikawa: Hey!
Hiroto: I would glad to. (smirk)
Haha, anyway, update! X3
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 8 . 8/22/2012
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OTHER PEOPLE THINK GAZELLE WAS A GIRL! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Gazelle: (red vein pops out) SHUT UP!
Hahahaha! Sorry, Suzuno. Pfft! Hihihi!
Gazelle: Grrr...
Haha, Gazelle, as you know; if you killed me then I'll take Hikari's soul with me!
Gazelle: Hey you won't do that to my sister!
then put out the think that you gonna kill me! I had better plan to take Hikari soul with me!
Gazelle: tch.
Somehow, you really reminded me to Shi. Keep updating then! ;)
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 7 . 8/22/2012
Pfft! Hihihihi, I know you both really a perfect couple, Burn, Gazelle. (smirk) I have no wonder why you both have so many fans that want you belonging each other.
Burn and Gazelle: Shut up!
Khukhu, fine, fine. Anyway, I wanna laugh on my ass when you guys arguing.
Burn: He that told me tulip!
Gazelle: You even say that I was a girl!
Burn: That's because your dress!
These both... Huff, please update more! :D
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 6 . 8/22/2012
PFFT! HAHAHAHAHAHA! G-G-GAZELLE... THEY THOUGHT YOU WAS A GIRL!
Terumi Aoi: How can you know that, Shiro-chan?
F-From how the speak! Soooo Gazelle! HAHAHAHAHA!
Gazelle: ENOUGH OF LAUGHING!
Hahaha! I-I know. Hahahaha! S-sorry...
Gazelle: humph!
Terumi Aoi: (sweatdrop)
Ow, he's getting mad. Anyway, update! X3
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 5 . 8/22/2012
Oh what the hell. It's really twisted! It should be Midorikawa that going to the ball ya idiot!
Aphrodi: Hey! How should I know? Blame the one who make it!
I can't!
Aphrodi: Why!
Cause I respect her!
Aphrodi: Ya weirdo!
You have noticed just now?
Aphrodi: Um, maybe?
Sigh. Anyway, keep update! :3
shiroi white-phoenix chapter 4 . 8/22/2012
Wow, what a mess...
Gazelle: What the (beep!)
Suzuno Hikari: O-Onii-san, it's rude!
I know you mad but, well I can't image.
Gazelle: Why you...
I want to know what happened next then. I await for it! XD
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