|Reviews for A foreign world|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
What a wonderful story.
Perfect John and Elizabeth.
You write some of the most beautiful Sparky.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
Just the right time for the both of them to say those 3 little but so important words to each other I Love You :))
Perfect John and Elizabeth :))
You write beautiful John and Elizabeth.
Thank you ;))
Sparky always :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Beautiful. I am loving all your stories. Please ciontinue and definetly more sparky.
| Codzwallop chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
I don't know if you read my other reviews yet, especially the one with the "three words". I must say, this time I'm not disappointed, you chose the right moment to make Elizabeth and John say they love each other. It isn't too soon, it's perfect timing.
I wrote a story related to that episode too! (but it sure isn't as well written as your work.)
(I think you might want to correct a tiny mistake in this sentence:
"from the base of his nape to the small of *her* back".)