Quite an interesting read, thx

Is he going to let Homura and Kohura live? They are complicit in the murders. Even now they speak of distrust. Without removing them the cycle will repeat in a generation or two.

4 sensational chapter.

First chapter better than I expected.

Really? this was the dumbest thing that he could have chosen.

love all the effort, drama,suspense you put into your story! i'll take your well plannedwritten chapters. I've waited years for updates from favorites just praying all was well and the author hadn't stopped writing or abandoned a story. still thankful for the story idea or plot to mull over

i find the drama in this chapter to be epic! I love the usurping of RootFukurou awakeningcoming into power

lor the choreography of the trainingfights. funnyblittle insights into the villains' thoughts

very sad i am reading this after the factnever discovered it sooner. Amazing action scenelove the insights into his actions/actinghimself as a Wiley, grizzled veteran Magiacal Prime MinisterGrandpa Defeater of the Dark Lord.

Such a shame this is unfinished, was a great story.

I think you mean “upon being convicted •Konoha• executed him and shipped his body to •Kumo• where it was buried in an unmarked grave.”

Not “upon being convicted •Kumo• executed him and shipped his body to •Konoha• where it was buried in an unmarked grave.”

This story has been keeping me sane while i recover from the side effects of the Covid Booster Shot. Wonderful story, moves a bit too fast so it’s sometimes hard to figure out that there was a time skip. That might just be because of the writing system you use. Ive found that when i write in the outline-flesh out- flesh out-detail-polish system, my writing tends to be somewhat clunky in topic changes unless i read through it as a whole piece once or twice.

A truly interesting story and one of the Best Crossover between Naruto and Harry Potter 've ever read! Awesome!

OMG the pairing...u really did get lost after the massacre...
I'm out good bye

hey, i hope you continue this, im having alot of fun reading it!

damn. this was some insane idea. so sad it was not finished.
thank you for what was written.