hi! i just found this facfic the other day, i realize you're busy with life, but i did want to stop and say this has been an amazing journey.

why the fuck are you leaving enemies alive when killing is allowed
using modern morals in a shinobi world
fucking tree hugger
its annoying

he is getting pussy in killing bandits and he is dark
he wouldnt pass kiri graduation exam with how against kiri he is

This was honestly the chapter where I quit this story the first time. The fact that Harry’s act of literally burning alive a bunch of orphans is portrayed as a necessary evil is honestly disgusting & deplorable. It also comes out of nowhere and serves no purpose except to hammer down how dark and edgy Fukarou is and it honestly just comes across as pathetic. Terrible protagonist, glad that I quit this story. Just needed to get this of my chest, this has been living rent free in my mind for waaaaay to long now, 2 years or something. I am glad to finally be free of it

Ehhh I was kinda hoping that he never gets the Sharingan. It has a certain baggage to it. And besides, he already has a "bloodline limit".

its shit

In one of the earlier chapters we read some of Harry's inner thinking, where he swore to himself that he would not allow himself be used in the Ushiha's incestual breeding program.

There is no need to deny him full access to his magic.
Shinobi are so fast that they can easily dodge any visible spells coming their way.
Harry isn't really Harry without it!

Ignore the commenter below. The pairing was awkward, sure, but that doesn’t detract from the rest of the story. This was really well written! I would’ve gone a more clinical route for the issue of clan expansion, though. In vitro fertilization, maybe? The power imbalance was uncomfortable. I really liked your descriptions of the Root takeover. Using the map was clever, and the way you described some scenes… I was tense the whole time! You have a talent for immersing readers in new environments. The harsh drive for self-improvement, his struggle for more power, to survive… his mindset came across really clearly.

This fic started off amazing. And then you ruined it. Romance I understand but pairing a 16 year old with a fully grown woman has a son the same age? Come one now. Might as well tag your fic with pedophilia. You can tell this was written by a man. Disappointing. On the off chance this was written by a women, or whatever, that's even worse.

I think this story would be a fantastic one to see finished. Just sayin'.

Damn wish this got updated

If you're too stupid to finish what you start, maybe don't start stories in the first place. You deserve the crap you get in life.

Just a Spade casually dropping by
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I really liked this story but I feel like the author fell off and lost the plot once they started doing multiple time jumps and pov changes during the course of one chapter. They kept doing this from about chapter 15? until they abandoned. The story became so convoluted to follow and came across more like an outline than an actual story anymore. The the author tried to get super mystical with their writing and the stories coherency fell apart even further. No wonder the author abandoned it.