Reviews for Wish
XoxoWriterGirloxoX chapter 2 . 3/1
PLEASE FINISHED! JK but seriously it was good! :)
LadyLee87 chapter 2 . 7/14/2013
aww this is a good start I want to see what happens next
Morbid-Delusions chapter 2 . 2/22/2013
This is awesome! awwh i wanna know what happens next x3
BabyInBlueishPink chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Update? Please? I'll give you a cookie?
KilalawakerX3 chapter 2 . 11/23/2012
D'awww, I love it! It's got a good mixture of sadness and romance :D
DJdaanie chapter 2 . 5/26/2012
Even though the story line is sad, I love it :)) Please keep up the good work!
pwenie chapter 2 . 3/4/2012
:)
damons-hot-as-hell chapter 2 . 2/15/2012
wow i want more i love this
anime1hinata chapter 2 . 10/29/2011
Give me more!

Omg, how long do we have to wait? ;;A;;
Fedski chapter 2 . 10/27/2011
pretty please update soon! i really love how this fic is going and can't wait for more!
Apple chapter 2 . 10/19/2011
sgvdjgshkjddg-GAH.

The drunken fluff at the end. Wonderful. w

Cannot wait for the next chapter Cx

/ slips into hideyhole to wait impatiently for the next chapter
lilanimefan247 chapter 2 . 10/18/2011
great job, ritsu is drunk hahah so funny

plz update soon
lilanimefan247 chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
so sad,

great job lol
DumpsterCat69 chapter 2 . 10/18/2011
update soon plz!

i really like this plot, and your writing style is aweeesome! :D
Natsukashimi chapter 2 . 10/17/2011
Sisters? I really want to reread the manga now. Usually, American fanfiction writers forget when the manga's characters are Japanese. This irritates me, but instead of mentioning how Onodera cursing so much is inconsistent with typical Japanese responses to sad events (quietly crying, deeply sorrowful changes in personality (at least in my family)), I give you credit because Onodera does tend to act out a lot, so it is believable. I love the painful, remorseful, yet comforting atmosphere you created the morning after the tragedy. Why was the sound of the chair scraping the floor ironically the loudest sound since Onodera had arrived at his sister's house? I think that's not ironic because everyone is in mourning, but this is just my tendency to point out odd word choices. Why did someone have to give money for Onodera's father to be buried in the family grave? Onodera's family is rich; his father is the CEO of Usami's main publishing company. I found this a bit curious. I'm interested as to why Onodera's mother was at her house when everyone was at Onodera's sister's house. I would imagine that they would want to be out of the house where Onodera's father had lived because it would be too nostalgically sad and also wait for Onodera to wake up since I have the vibe that they think family should stay together in such trying types. Why did Onodera's mother leave the house in such a hurry, anyway? I'm a bit confused. Also, the house is Onodera's? He has an apartment and I wouldn't say it was his house if his name wasn't on the deed. Slight oversight in words? Oh, well. Onodera getting drunk? Plausible, I guess. Oh, this text message irritates me. Personally, I hate chatspeak and use proper grammar in my own text messages. I understand that Onodera is drunk, but my pet peeves still apply in fanfiction, apparently. The funeral is coming very quickly. I don't think that's typically the case, but it's been too long since anyone in my family died. This chapter was alright, but enjoyable. Please do keep writing and don't take my criticisms personally.
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