Reviews for Until I saw you
Jeni K chapter 10 . 8/24/2011
Eventhoug Im a 28 yr old woman, I swear my mind is a 16 yr old boy cause I totally laughed my ass of at the "Firmer" joke he made. I love a gay Jake, means he wont try anything with Bella. Edward on the other hand, might be kinda funny to watch. I cant wait to see what happens when Bella gets her gift. I still maintain, I WANT ONE!
lovedwardalways chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
Finally able to read this awesome piece of fiction here. At 7 o'clock I get this in my inbox but it would not let me open it :(. But I got to read it and I sooooo loved it. First Edward and his pleasures in the car my jaw dropped to the ground omg that is hawt. Then in the kitchen making his likeness in rubber again he would make a mint if he mass produced those. With the quick trip to the shower he is a man possessed his princessa has him under a spell making him act like a horny teenager. Hehe you make jake a flamboyant gay the only way I can stand him in a fic or maybe with a grown Nessie.
robsessed1123 chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
ya she iz! fluv fluv fluv! this edward ownz me! thx bb
EDDIEBOYLOVER chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
Good chapter. Omg Edward has made a dildo for Bella omg I can't wait to see the look on her face hahaha. And omg Jake is gay omg that was hilarious. So when does Bella meet with the cullens? Next chapter? No maybe the 12th chapter. Well I can't wait for more. xoxo
Kgunter34 chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
Gay Jake's are the best Jake's. Great update.
IrisDraven chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
Lol I loves it. They are both so under each others skin and don't even realize it. I love your trainer Jake. Good Chapter.
Siobhan Whitlock chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
Oh boy! I cant believe he did that!

I cannot wait to see her reaction to his present! *snickers*
nmydreamz chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
Girl how do you write this so damn hot? PMSL during his 'casting' time LOL, I could just see him sweating and swearing while dying in agony hahahhaaaa Any chance you'll be giving us a peek at his dream? I soo have a feeling it would kill us! You should seriously think about mass-producing 'His Royal Rubberness', you would be rich beyond your wildest dreams ahahhahaahahahaaaa!

keep the fun & hotness coming bb!

CanineTeethFreak chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
More. More. More. More. More. More. More. More.

Please...? :D
sandym chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
Masssssssyy! i love it and i can't wait till Edward realizes that Bella and the Swan daughter are the same person! can't wait for the next update babe! love it, the avid reader
lvtwilight09 chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
I love this chapter (even with your little posting malfunction). Now the question I have for you is...can you talk to Edward about making a gift for me like he made for Bella? lol. Love ya hun!
cestlaviesuckers chapter 9 . 8/23/2011
Awesome update! LOL Edward was tripping out, poor guy. Bella has him pussy whipped big time, and I loves it! I really enjoy this fic and your writing, I always seem to look for an update first thing whenever I check in to my email! Was so happy to find an update! Keep up the rocking work! x

P.S Thank you so much for your lovely reviews on my stories. I really appreciate it. :-)
Sipitbigapple62 chapter 9 . 8/21/2011
*Hands up* Can I get one of those replicas please? I'd rather th real thing but hey at a push... So Edwards in for quite a shock then when he finds the identity of Charlie's daughter! Can't wait for that. Great update honey.x
Noellebby chapter 9 . 8/21/2011
Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
theonlykyla chapter 9 . 8/20/2011
To my rock my socks. I'm so happy to have you and Steph and Vector;) We are the three best friends that anyone could have, the three best friends that anyone could have, the three best friends that anyone could and we'll never, ever, ever, ever, ever leave each other;)

Great Chapter!

You know I love these peeps and love you more;)
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