Reviews for Until I saw you
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I so glad your friends pushed you to write this. Its really good so Ill just go to the next chapter and Ill se you again after that :)
theonlykyla chapter 8 . 8/11/2011
Loved It! Love You! GREAT JOB, BB!

I absolutely love that Tanya's gonna get whacked...I mean, she is a royal bitch...and a skanky ho...might as well take her down;)

So proud of you,

Kyla
EDDIEBOYLOVER chapter 8 . 8/11/2011
I love it! This is gonna be a good smutty story. ;}
Sipitbigapple62 chapter 8 . 8/11/2011
I never find control and violence hot but for some reason I seem to in this story! Go figure. :) They obviously bring out the dominant in each other,it'll be interesting to see who comes out on top. x
Flavia chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I love confident beautiful Bella! Great chapter!
underestateofsorrow chapter 8 . 8/11/2011
Amazing fricken storry! These two are hot and saucy for each other! Lovin' it! You're an awesome writer!
IrisDraven chapter 8 . 8/10/2011
I love the power playing with these two. It's epic. It was nice seeing the business side of Bella and it's amazing she is in a Cullen building. Good chapter.
lvtwilight09 chapter 8 . 8/10/2011
Tanya isn't going to know what hit her. Loved the chapter hun, you know how I feel about this story...can't wait to see them transition more into the business side of things. Awesome job! Love ya!
scareDcat chapter 8 . 8/10/2011
*sigh* So romantic ;) No really! ~ I wonder who'll crack first ~ them or me?

Thank you for updating early xxx
texasbella chapter 8 . 8/10/2011
"Check. Mother Fuckin'. Mate."

I'm left there stunned and horny as hell.

LOVE IT!
nmydreamz chapter 8 . 8/10/2011
"Check. Mother Fuckin'. Mate." oooooooh you said it, girlfriend! so hot. and I have to say i'm thrilled about the hit on Tanya, after what she did. it's about time someone killed her off early in a story! Great chapter, I can't wait to see how everything entwines. Now, how can I sway you for an earlier update? :) luv u

xox
Kgunter34 chapter 8 . 8/10/2011
Great update.
Babe Pryor chapter 8 . 8/10/2011
I had to speed read, somehow I missed the last 3 updates. Now we have Bella and Edward, both mob types and they met as children and don't realize who the other one is, but Carlisle and Esme DO know. I can't wait for them to find out, also, it'd be nice to know if Edward has a 'past history' with a miss Tanya Denali, Bella's next hit...xx
smadril chapter 8 . 8/10/2011
Hey babe i soooo loved this and when Edward got the best of Bella and said Check Mate... it was so fuckin hot... he can sneak behind me anytime! So Tanya will be taken out so sooon, and i'm glad cause i'm not a Tanya fan! I love this story babe, the avid reader...

want more!
NUTZ4LUTZ chapter 8 . 8/10/2011
Love this! I just can't get enough! Mobward is so fucking hot!
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