|Reviews for A New Story|
| Ed chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
awww... no jarlsberg... But anyway, don't have enough to judge story yet. Please keep writing... Also, first person is a tricky format to write it, lest you risk introducing word trains and purple prose... but i guess you can do that just as easily in other forms too
| Axel'sChakrams8 chapter 1 . 10/31/2015
Even though I've never actually been on Kingdom of Loathing, I love this chapter xD
Maybe it doesn't make any sense, but the writing appears solid and the tale you're beginning is quite humorous. Keep going, if you would; I'd love to keep reading
| DoorMatt chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Nice. I wish more people played KOL.
| Jennifer chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
That was great...
Hope to read more soon...