Reviews for Petty Erosions |
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xXFree Falling AngelXx chapter 1 . 1/18/2012 I really love your Sherlock stories a lot! I think what naked them great is how you could actually see the situation happening. Really, fantastic job!(: |
Hekateras chapter 1 . 1/1/2012 D'awwww! I'm such a sucker for friendship gen stories like this. John's emotional state was very well articulated and, well... D'awwwww again! |
VampireApple chapter 1 . 9/20/2011 It doesn't seem like a stretch, Sherlock killing off a lot of John's possessions. |
Can't delete account - fuck chapter 1 . 8/26/2011 "So you crept into my room while I was sleeping, stole my clock-radio, and sacrificed it for the sake of a case?" Sherlock cast a sardonic eyebrow at John. "Sacrificed, really, John? There's no need to be melodramatic." Best banter ever! It was all very in character for both John and Sherlock, well done. |
BlackWolfSong chapter 1 . 7/14/2011 "Why is my alarm clock in a thousand pieces on the kitchen table?" "There wasn't enough room for all of it on the coffee table." I haven't even read the rest of the story yet and I was laughing until tears were rolling down my cheeks. That is *such* a Sherlock thing to say. Brava! |
sherlockfic chapter 1 . 7/7/2011 Oh, this is so funny and cute and 'hits the spot'. "When I die, that's what my bloody headstone will read: 'He sent me a text.'" Love that line! I love a lot of the lines but this one might be the best of the best! |
twinchaosblade chapter 1 . 7/6/2011 This was brilliant! You absolutely nailed the character quirks of John and Sherlock. I simply l.o.v.e.d. Sherlocks dead-pan answer of "because there wasn't enough room for it on the coffee table", blissfully ignoring the real intention of John's question. Plus, you did a great job of piling all those annoyances on John that had him fed up and totally resigned to his fate. It's something we all know too well. Sometimes it's adding up some pretty insignificant little frustrations that break us rather than major incidents or tragic catastrophic experiences. I really adored the bonding moment between Sherlock and John when Sherlock came with his peace offering in the form of acquired tea. After stealing John's last nerve with his antics, it was the right thing to do at the right time that made all the difference. Well done! |
SarahTee chapter 1 . 7/6/2011 Awww! Lovely! :-D Xx |
ScientificSkye chapter 1 . 7/6/2011 Wonderful! This was not only funny and cute but also in character. Kudos to you. Love it! There needs to be more fan fiction like this in the interworld. :3 |
Elle dont tu lis les histoires chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 Hah, for nothing special, I sure enjoyed that a lot :D |
Catrina Marlow chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 "...peering over the chronometric carnage like a vulture looking for a particularly tasty organ." This has been my favorite line in any fic in some considerable time. I also liked how you engineered John's tea/shower in the train after he missed both at the flat. Well written, clever, inventive, canon fic. Now Sherlock just has to remember to buy the clock? |
kittehgotclaws chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 Nothing special? I thought it was brilliant. Am going to read your other fics now ;) |
historylover chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 I really enjoyed it! Heh. I thought Sherlock was coming to sacrifice John's cell phone in the name of the case as well. Aw that he was offering tea and biscuits! In your stories, I'm reminded of the line from Lestrade that Sherlock is a great man, but maybe, if they're lucky, he can become a good man. John is helping him on his way. Loved it! It's sooooooo long until season 2! I'm hoping and praying that PBS will be airing season 2, like they aired season 1, because I don't get BBC America. Thanks for this! Kat |
Maimat B chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 aww, sweet story. Loved it! |
Grissina chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 I hate this kind of days, when nothing goes extraordinary wrong but nothing seems to work properly right, and the frustrations keeps accumulating out of small incidents. They end up being the worst days if someone don't make something right for you. Sherlock can be sweet when he wants to. :) Thanks for sharing it. |