Reviews for Breaking Out
Molotov chapter 6 . 9/28/2014
Damn son. What I wouldn't give for this story to continue.

I regret my coming to the Chuck party so late because I wonder if I could've put in my voice at the time, maybe great stories like this wouldn't have been abandoned.

That's an asinine assertion, but I just wish there was more. This is a cool story idea - what if the government HAD caught Chuck in the Pilot.
Mr. M.Parker chapter 6 . 10/2/2013
Just a good chapter...
Mr. M.Parker chapter 5 . 10/2/2013
It who's a fast chapter to read... But I like it a lot.
Mr. M.Parker chapter 4 . 10/2/2013
That is not Sarah at the end of the chapter or I am wrong.
Mr. M.Parker chapter 3 . 10/2/2013
The story is getting more funnier for ever chapter so fare.
Mr. M.Parker chapter 2 . 10/2/2013
That who's a good chapter and it who's so funny too.
Mr. M.Parker chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Interesting start of a story...
Guest chapter 6 . 7/25/2013
YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT THERE, HOW HEARTLESS AREE YOUU?
This soo has to be updated, it's such a brilliant story! Anyway, hope you update this.. 3:
P.J. Murphy chapter 6 . 1/15/2013
Sorry this slipped past my email. Very poignant chapter. Some of your best work is when Chuck and Sarah have their quiet moments. Great chapter.
tkygyn chapter 6 . 12/17/2012
Pretty nice. Cant wait to see where you take this.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/17/2012
I really, really, like this one (as per usual since all of your stuff is awesome!) Looking forward to seeing more!
KryptonitePoison chapter 6 . 11/30/2012
I like this little story, please finish it.
Mobi Cobbult chapter 6 . 11/30/2012
Sweet lovin! you've continued this. I hated you for so long for not co... err. I mean I really hoped you would not neglect this one forever as it was one of the first few that really caught my attention when i first dove into this fanfiction thing. I really am stoked to see you picking back up your stories.
jinxed97 chapter 6 . 11/26/2012
Great chapter...
uplink2 chapter 6 . 11/26/2012
Wow, I can't tell you how pleased I was to get an update to this one. I've been waiting for it for a very long time. Loved how Chuck could tell the difference between Brutus and the fake Sarah Walker. The shared betrayal from the douchebag Larkin was a great addition in that the NSA really was much harsher on both Chuck and Sarah because of their connection to their betrayer.

What was also interesting is how Sarah felt the need to be open with Chuck even though he was asleep at least in her mind. Sure maybe its part of her coming to terms with her betrayal and she sees an innocent caught up in something he never asked for or deserved but got stabbed in the back by the same man who betrayed her. But it is a much more open Sarah than in canon at this point in their story. I like that. It's interesting that she talked about Bryce getting to her as one of the reasons she got sloppy yet it seems Chuck is getting to her as well. I wonder how that will play out.

Really interesting cliffy with the return of the db responsible for all of it. Just don't take over a year to post the next one please.
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