Reviews for Saving Allen
LunaWalker chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
aww that was sweet ending
ASliverOfHope chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
That was amazing! I love how well you wrote the detail in the beginning with Allen cutting himself, it felt so real. I loved the quiet comforting side of Lavi and the ending! :)
Yorugirl chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
This was an amazing story! I don't usually like Allen and Lavi together but this story changed my mind.
kitsuke-chan chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Wow. This was a really great story! I like how you kept the usually hyper Lavi silent, You had the personality's down well :) Normally Allen wouldn't be able going on living if he knew that he couldn't use his innocence to save someone, but the way you have it in the story it fits perfectly well. :D Wonderful job! I like your writing style :D we have similar interests! Keep up the good work! XD
the Candle Joker chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Oh it was beautiful. I love how the depressing beginning slowly turned into a happy ending :3 very good job I'm surprised there aren't many reviews on this one... O_o
fangirl12232 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
aww the relationship with allen and lavi in this story is so cute . goodnluck with ur stories
Violet Horizon chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
O_O This was beautifully written and very descriptive. Allen cutting himself is pretty cruel but I can see him doing it since he tends to blame himself alot. And Lavi taking care of Allen like that was just so cute and sweet Oh and the story about the baby was heartbreaking T-T But this was great :D
ElricLawliet chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Wow. That was...fantastic. I really lived how well it was written, and the way it flowed. You've really outdone yourself this time, Fox-chan.

I also liked how at the end, you didn't just make Allen stop cutting. It made it more realistic, because in reality, something like that is never that simple. It was amazing, and definitely a favorite.

Good job!
DGrayManFanatic chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
This was so sweet. I love their relationship :3