Reviews for Their First Fourth
jgames chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I love how you incorporated the sensitive ears of the animal kingdom. Great story!
ygirl87 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Mike101 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Loved the story, loved the kids, loved the villians, and loved that you made a fourth of july special. Awesome job and I'll hear more from you with book three. Peace dude and Mike out.
Heartless demon wolf chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Great one-shot bro, the kits are awesome, and the villians are a cute oneshot, but you still need more villians in book three (stronger, faster and darker so they could be called villians and want to kill the hero's not join them, not that damn doctor and make them animals, it's more fun) good job with stating the real reason why America celbrates the forth of July bro, you need any help I got your back, peace.