Reviews for Her Velvet Voice
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Please continue with this story, I absolutely LOVE it! i have been waiting awhile for you to continue on!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
you should continue on with the story
owlcity89 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
I actually find myself intrigued and wanting more...
Andy 46587 chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Could you look up the lyrics Pearl Jam's "Alive". This is because you did something rare, you topped their creepiness. Congratulations?

By the way, I'm not trying to be mean to you, I just don't like the premise of this story.
ScOut4It chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
I still need to finish watching this movie; it's cool, but I got side-tracked.

Alright, sew...er, so... I did see this Beldam or Bedlam character and thought she was putting off some vibes myself. So, I'm glad that you wrote a scene that speaks to that. And I'm with you on it really being not only nothing like her real mother, but also not her real mother (just a deliciously dark woman who wants her to call her mother;).

For me, what doesn't really rope me in (another pun!) to this story is that I don't really see Coraline being aware of what she's feeling physically and especially she seems too young and innocent to have experienced being fucked before to be begging for it: so that's my critique. If it was a more subtle seduction I would really be on board and interested in an update.

Thanks for writing something that isn't as common knowing that it would be a bit harder to find a following and sharing anyways :)

Scout
elderwolves chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
I have nothing to say but... can you write more... I mean, for the sake of reviewing... :3
Rosemarie753 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
I really Like it i read it on my dsi
Unicornz4evah chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
*winces at the f word* Oh the fanfic is interesting. Pretty scary ending and yet fitting I guess
TaintedFlare chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
pls. update...been looking for this pairing but all of them were tag horror
Mrs Rosa Riddle chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Thanks for the lovely reviews! I'll definatley continue with this story, I don't know if the second chapter will flow as easily as the first one as I've kinda run out of steam, but I'll give it a good try!

RedButtons. xx
Numbervania chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Good start, I would certainly like it for this story to be continued. More please?
IzzyHEARTZnaruto chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
err strange - but interesting :) Are you gonna write more? I think you captuured the Beldam's personality pretty good anyway and if you do another chapter it would be interesting to see things more from her point of view, apart from a few spelling mistakes it was a good fic.

Elizabeth. xxxx