Reviews for Sincerely Untrue
Hermione Aquatic chapter 18 . 12/28/2014
You are a genius. I loved the plot. I obviously expected Zeus and Hera to get back together. I forgot to mention; I'm a Percy Jackson fan, but also a huge fan of Greek Mythology, itself. Getting back to the story, I love it sooooo much and the reader part of me is anxious to read further on. Those words, those adjective and the syntax you used is magnificent, it really got down to my heart. Very few fanfics touch my heart. I'm going to go read Journey of Broken Deals...
Thanks for writing this fanfic
GoddessOfMarriage- QueenHera chapter 18 . 4/10/2014
Please keep your promise. I love this story. Continue it if you can. I wish you would as soon as possible, Update. :)
Guest chapter 18 . 2/20/2014
Guest chapter 18 . 11/17/2013
I love this story it can't be over your writing is beautiful and detailed u nail all the characters and it is so deep I love it I wish it would be completed please
NoLongerInUseBaby chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
I love Drama too. XD we got a lot in common!
NoLongerInUseBaby chapter 3 . 8/22/2013
I LOVE Hera and Hades together...they my OTP.
NoLongerInUseBaby chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
Did anybody tell you, you are a talented writer?
NoLongerInUseBaby chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Out of all the stories i read about Zeus and Hera...this is how I wanted Hera to be. All the other ones refrain her...this one was how I picture Hera's reaction...Thank you!
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 18 . 6/30/2013
absolutely crashed that relationship between HERA AND ZEUS was not finalised but i respect your decision. I do not believe I would be able to find a greater HeraxZeus fanfic
Guest chapter 17 . 4/22/2013
well i'm glad Hades is honorable
Ms. Jynesis chapter 18 . 4/18/2013
I support your decision. :) After all, you are the author. And although writers write for their audience, they should also write for themselves. :) So, yes, I am a bit sad; however, I know that your writing will only get better. :) Good luck :)
Theisaryz Eufuelle chapter 18 . 4/18/2013
I'm very sad about this :( Like you said, I felt like there was a lot of possiblities. I'm very sorry that you hit a dead end. That's probably the worst thing that could happen to a story... I'm crying right now. I will offer a narcissus for this story. But I enjoyed it while it lasted. I'll give journey of broken ideals a shot. Goodbye Sincerely Untrue. (I still won't be taking it off my fav list because I really did enjoy it! ;) )
Ms. Jynesis chapter 10 . 3/18/2013
I just love all these Hades/Hera scenes! I've re-read them about three times, now! :)
Ms. Jynesis chapter 17 . 3/17/2013
Wow, that was one giant, philosophical, familial, therapy session! I loved it! :)
Theisaryz Eufuelle chapter 17 . 1/11/2013
Alright. I have to gather my thoughts here.

First, I must tell you I think I bit my finger and my lips too hard on some of the scenes in this story that I almost drew blood. For that I praise you. One of the joys of reading is getting lost in the story. You have done a marvelous job of making me feel exactly what they are feeling. Are you perhaps a muse?

Second, I believe you are a very intelligent person. This fanfic raised quite a few philosophical questions in my opinion. I enjoyed on pondering on all of them and analyzing your points of view about love, adultery and divorce.

Third, I must say there are a lot of unnecessary commas around, some grammar mistakes and misspellings, nothing major. But sometimes I have to read a sentence twice or thrice to figure out what you, as the author, wanted to say. I do not critique grammar much because I'm not an expert nor a grammar nazi, but what I do criticize is the plot. And I thoroughly enjoyed every sentence. Though I do suggest that if you are unsure of the spelling of some words (for example scared vs. scarred) you may consult an online dictionary like . This is not meant to be hurtful but helpful.

Fourth, I am not a fan of Zeus. I view him as a spoiled god who is the major antagonist in every story after his heroic deeds in the titan war. And I do pity Hera for being married with such a person although she is not without faults. You have changed that. You made me see another potential facet of these characters. There aren't much Greek myths and those that do paint a very unsightly picture of the gods.
What I do adore is the story of Hades and Persephone. I adore how you have portrayed this couple although I cursed Hera a few times for compromising their perfect marriage. In my opinion, there aren't too many decent marriages in Greek Myths and HP is one of the only ones I respect.

Lastly, this I believe is one of the Diamond rated fanfics in this website. I am quite an avid reader and I am very picky about what I read. I thoroughly enjoyed the absence of smut and the inclusion of drama. Some scenes touched me so much that invisible ninjas started cutting onions in front of my eyes. This is one of the stories that actually made me think deeply about relationships. No, this is not the cheezy romance commonly found in websites as these, this is a depiction of real emotions. Truly unforgettable.

I commend you for writing this. Truly you are a talented writer.

I hope you will continue and finish this fanfic. Also please delve into the Amphitrite x Poseidon and Hades x Persephone relationship. Personally, I believe HP is the model relationship. Hades can do no wrong in my eyes (He could have fooled me if he said he was god of justice and fairness and that the only reason he kidnapped Seph, if he actually did, is that he doesn't have social skills).

I look forward to the completion of this fic and your future Greek myth fics.

This story belongs in my favorite list :)
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