|Reviews for When You Fall in Love|
| maggiebreen chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
short and sweet! I liked it.
| Nicconicco chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Very good. very very good. keep up the good work eh! you are very talented!
| poison1234 chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
It was so sad. I think you did an amazing job on this story. It made cry a bit in the end too. Very emotional and very believable.
| OffMyTea chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
This was awesome! Sad though...
I think a sequel is in order!
| Cadaver Collector chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
That was wonderful...
| TaiyouChan chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
I liked how you wrote it. And I didn't notice any obvious spelling or grammar mistakes, so that's awesome!
I would suggest adding a character death warning either in your summary or at the beginning of the story though.
But excellent story!