Reviews for When You Fall in Love
maggiebreen chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
short and sweet! I liked it.
Nicconicco chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Very good. very very good. keep up the good work eh! you are very talented!
poison1234 chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
It was so sad. I think you did an amazing job on this story. It made cry a bit in the end too. Very emotional and very believable.
OffMyTea chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
This was awesome! Sad though...

I think a sequel is in order!
Cadaver Collector chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
That was wonderful...
TaiyouChan chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
That... T-T

I liked how you wrote it. And I didn't notice any obvious spelling or grammar mistakes, so that's awesome!

I would suggest adding a character death warning either in your summary or at the beginning of the story though.

But excellent story!