Reviews for The Triggerman's Apprentice
Lady Sorbet chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
To be honest, I was a little cautious about reading this story at first, just because I've had horrible experiences with OC's in fanfictions, as well as characters being put into situations with children. However, I decided to be open-minded since I ship Mordecai with pretty much anyone and I love his character. I will say this first, you did an excellent job keeping him in character. I believe he tends to think a lot rather than say how he feels all the time because he's so picky, which you showed in chapter 2. Also, I really like the idea for the plot. This kind of thing is sometimes over done, but I can't help giggling at the thought of Mordecai having to take care of a child (so much so that I wish it would happen in the actual series :P). I realize you haven't updated this in about a year, but I really hope you decide to continue. Your writing style is very enjoyable to read and I'm excited to see what happens next. :)