Reviews for Adelina
Guest chapter 5 . 7/10/2013
I love it
Mari Wollsch chapter 5 . 7/9/2013
lovely, when will you continua? xxxx
CodelyokoFan23 chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
This is an interesting story and i hope to see more of it
ChaoticArisu13 chapter 5 . 6/25/2013
Hope to see more
Keena3105 chapter 5 . 5/27/2013
update again soon please, this is quite a unique story and i'm eager to read more :)
Io's Torment chapter 5 . 5/18/2013
This is really interesting, I love your different characters.
Rain Shigu chapter 5 . 5/18/2013
A good story you have so far. I can't wait to see how the incident with the troll goes.
harlequin320 chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
interesting, update soon
Rose1414 chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
Please update I really like your story!
lynxreader chapter 5 . 5/6/2013
i do like, and if i had a chance to log in i'd post this under my "real" 'nym to say so. this is one of those tales i've been worried had been abandoned, and am quite happy to see hasn't been. thanks!

anyway, actual review... i like Adelina as a character, she's more interesting than JKR's canon-Harry. well, okay, that's not really too hard to do, canon-Harry's a bore. she's more believable too, her background matches her behavior better than the canon character. alright, that isn't hard either, the only canon character who seems to match their background is Voldy... you have an interesting setup here, with the rest of the world expecting canon-Harry (more or less) and about to get someone drastically different; that's always good for laughs and/or fireworks, and i can see the differences starting to bend the plot already. plus you're introducing a race of creatures of your own, with their own history and background, which you're fleshing out well and believably so far. great work, i'm liking it.
AnFan-n-More chapter 5 . 5/4/2013
Interesting story. Definitely one to watch. It will be interesting to see what befalls Adelina in the following years. As with a lot of your work, I really like the character interactions. You tell your stories well.

I look forward to more :)
JaKeS91 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Cool start make it a femslach alone looking foward to the story
Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 5 . 4/16/2013
Well I just finished reading chapters 1-5 and I must say this is truly a amazing story. I am astounded, its a girl Harry fic which in of itself is not rare but a creature female Harry is practically unheard of! Then you add in that she is royalty and you've hit a trifecta that is just plain awesome.

I love the premise of the lamia, I'm very much intrigued by what abilities adelina possess, other than her base form, does she have the gorgon ability to turn enemies to stone? Etc.

I sincerely hope down the line that Adelina and Hermione become intimate and start a relationship, the coming out scene of Hermione to her parents would be great to read, especially when she introduces adelina as Royalty. If you go with the threesome, after the Grangers get over all that shock, introduce Luna as the third person in the relationship lol!

Luna would be the other girl, she's just such a quirky and free spirit, I can see her wandering naked through the forbidden forest, and adelina chucks off her clothes and joins her, glad to find a fellow naturalist and their unique relationship goes from there.

All in all I must say that this story is just brilliant, thank you for sharing it with us, I eagerly await your next chapter. favorited
Formerly BM Jr chapter 5 . 4/14/2013
wow, it's nice to see an update to this story, even though it came out about a week ago now.

I honestly thought you were done updating it, which was bad, because i think this is a pretty interesting story, something new at the very least.

anyways I'ma pass out at my keyboard now, good job with the new chapter.

kapuis chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
Very good chapter.
I like the introduction of Angelina and of her family.
I look forward to read the next chapter.
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