|Reviews for Eleven|
| fuzzy bunnies chapter 1 . 1/15
| DragonSiren7 chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Oh. My. God. This is... good. Really, really good. Writing, plot, everything. Just... excuse me while I go cry my eyes out... Ciao for now, DragonSiren7
| T. R. Wexler II chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
This is really sad and sweet and ahhhhhh-!
| CarlyH chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
That truly was quite beautiful. I wasn't sure how it would be and at first I wasn't sure, but in the end I am without a doubt happy to have read it. A masterpiece!
| PhoenixDragonDreamer chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Beautiful. so, so heartbreaking - and with such a rawness to it, it takes my breath away. Just gorgeous, sweetie. Thank you...
| GoddessAmanda1984 chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
This is a really interesting idea and you've done a wonderful job portraying it.
| expiry 4.23 chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
I absolutely loved this one. It was heart-breaking and hilarious and tender all at once.
| Phoebe Cloud chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
This was truly heartbreaking. I kept waiting for the Doctor (or John, I suppose) to pull out a mysterious fob watch(;
Except, that would sort of defeat the purpose of the story, so yanno.
I absolutely love this. It's so brilliant and so sad, and it's sort of the truth. If Gallifrey and all the centuries he spent traveling turned out to be a delusion, then that's all he would be. A madman with a box.
Love love loved it.
| SCGAThrawn chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Oh. My. Gosh. I love this. Please write more? Pretty please with a cherry on top?
| God of Laundry Baskets chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
:( What a sad story. But very nicely written. :)
| Completely Different chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Beautiful! One of the most haunting AUs I've ever read. It kept perfectly true to the original characters, making a piece that managed to be both hilarious and sad. Wonderful work.
| Silvera Sea chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
You know, this take on Doctor Who is sadder than anything that I have ever read or watched. I couldn't bear to see if the Doctor was truly mad. While reading this story I could feel my heart slowly break in two, chips of it falling into the pit of my stomach in despair.
Of course, it didn't help that I was listening to Isaac Shepard's Gentle (a very beautiful piano piece) when reading this.
I congratulate you for writing something so imaginative and sad. It was very realistic, and I think that was what saddened me the most.
| westwindhowl chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Wow. I really don't know what to think. I like the idea and your characterization and writing style are good but my head seems to cringe from the idea of the Doctor as an insane human, lol. I was waiting for a fob watch to show up and for it all to be an evil scheme devised by the Master. Very good but very disturbing to me. I think the whole Whoniverse would revolt if this came to be canon.
| bluewingedkitty chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Agajgdk. I'm afraid I can't be more eloquent than that. He IS mad, isn't he? But then we let him because he really is a time travelinng alien.
But when he isn't...he seems exactly the same. That's the best part. The way you've written him, he seems the same. But, of course, he's insane. Which makes me realize how so very close the real Doctor is to complete madness. I think.
Characterization was dead-on. Well done. I particularly enjoyed Rory's bits.
Gah. I very much enjoyed this story and wanted to convey why in this review but I'm not sure how much sense it made. :P I'm a bit sleep deprived and my brain is begining to melt and now I'm rambling. I'm going to shut up.
Intriguing idea, well executed. Good job. :)
| MesserGirl chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
'While Rory sits on the floor inside Tesco's and pretends that the nutters running up and down the aisles don't belong to him'
I love that line.. :D
I think that you've done a great job writing this, it's fantastic but real