|Reviews for The Squib|
| randomosity69 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Wow, this was SO poetic! :D You tell your sister to get an account in , first thing tomorrow.(If she hasn't yet).
| KaoruTheRandomBookworm chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
I read this story when it first came out. No lie. But I guess I never reviewed...so I'll do that now.
I really really really really really liked this story. It gave out a mysterious atmosphere and had a twist at the end. I liked it. :) A lot. Good job.
| FirePony16 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
You're very good at description. This piece seems poetic to me. It's very well-written. :)
I wouldn't have put the Stephanie Meyer reference since one this is in the Harry Potter fandom and two I personally am not a fan. But feel free to ignore me. :)
Your spelling and grammar were excellent and I didn't see any errors. Errors take away from a story. Good job. :)
| Nutty Nerd chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
The first description is reminisent of that of Mary-Sues. It's interesting. I think this story is saying that people who create OC's that are amazing are in reality very plain and normal.
| Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
So, what were we waiting for? More Butterbeer?