|Reviews for Please Twins II The Sequel|
| CureDream90 chapter 24 . 8/28/2013
although i'm not a big fan of screenplay format this story was really good! helped me figure out a few things about the three of them!
| dbz lovah chapter 24 . 8/18/2013
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHY DID IT END please right more like a part three or something this is one of the only fanfics i actually liked and read fanfics every night until around 3 in the morning. so PLEASE WRITE MORE
| tpeeters12 chapter 24 . 5/21/2013
OMG! This was the best story I've ever read on this site. I can't believe how you made everything seam so plausable and silly at the same time. Just like how it's done in the show! As soon as you put in the parts that have Maiku and Keiko doing that signature nyu of Karen's I knew those three had to be family. Also you left us with some unanswered just like the show did. Why didn't Keiko recognize her children as soon as she started teaching in their school? How come Keiko's realization of their true indetities only happened after the DNA analysis on the three kids was done correctly? Are there any more space members of their families they have yet to meet?
I hope you are planning a sequill to this story covering Maiku's and Miina's marriage, and how the new family is addapting to collegue life. Also, I hope you pitch this to the TV networks, this story would make an excellent sequill to Please Twins!
Keep up the good work!
| oldspacecadet3 chapter 24 . 9/30/2012
I have to thank you for offering an excellent story as a closure of sorts to the Please Teacher series. Yes, the first four volumes of the anime stood alone as a complete series in and of itself, and was very enjoyable, yet I did wonder if there was going to be other stories in the same universe highlighting other characters that had relatively minor roles in the original, specifically Ms. Mizuho's mother and little sister Maho.
In the Please Twins anime, there were a number of loose ends to cope with, yet I will give them the benefit of a doubt that this was done deliberately in order to allow the audience to use their own imaginations to 'fill in the blanks', so to speak, according to each person's own inclinations; still, it is rather annoying once one begins to think about it in some depth.
In the manga adaptation of Please Twins, an explanation of sorts was added at the point where the three was returning from the Okinawa trip they won in a supermarket sweepstakes. A woman was in the doorway of the house as they came down the driveway and introduced herself as the mother of one of the girls. Later, she explained that there were financial troubles that caused the breakup of the families into the situations the children grew up in. After a chance comment that night by the claimed daughter, the woman realized that she had made a mistake as to the identity of her daughter, admitting the next morning that the other girl was her real daughter, not the one she claimed the previous night. A day or so later, she asked the girl if she wanted to live with her at the woman's home. Just as the train pulled up to the station, the boy arrived (with some help) to stop her from leaving. The woman pushed her daughter toward him as the door closed, causing them to accidently kiss. In the last few pages they and some friends were clearing the yard of their original house in hopes of their parents retuning as well.
While this did provide an ending of sorts, it was somewhat unsatisfying to some degree considering the quality of the rest of the story. This story is on par with the rest of the series, and explained to my satisfaction the resolution of the situations presented.
At first the screenplay format was slightly distracting, being unfamiliar, but now seems more appropriate than a straight narration like the manga had.
What was particularly pleasing was the part where their mother stated that she and the kids were going to be a family again come hell or high water, so to speak, after all the time that had passed being apart.
The most memorable and amusing part to me was where Mizaho's mother telling Kei to go take a long walk while she, Maho, and Keiko were holding down (with some difficulty) Mizaho, who was enduring mood swings as well as partial physical morphing due to her pregnancy. If all the women of her planet goes through this phase, as Hatsuho states, then one can only wonder what Kei will do when Mizaho gets pregnant again and they are not able to help out like this time, especially with one or two children already present.
This would make quite a story in itself, and a good addition to the Please Teacher universe if handled correctly. It could also be an Ah! My Goddess crossover, with one or more of the goddesses playing the role of a midwife. I can hope that someone decides to try his or her hand at this idea.
| KoMonkeyXXX chapter 24 . 2/15/2012
You did well! You are a good writer so please write more soon.
| KoMonkeyXXX chapter 22 . 2/13/2012
Hi! I'll be reading more soon!
| KoMonkeyXXX chapter 12 . 2/12/2012
These are really good and I will read more soon!
| Anito Works chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Damn, I hate plays. .
But still a good story and it is a sin not to turn this into an anime
| jayb chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
This story is a good extension for the series. New characters, situations and twists at the end. It is enjoyable.