Reviews for Hidden
Guest chapter 5 . 12/14/2012
thanks i love your work keep it up it was awesome
sami chapter 6 . 4/9/2012
please rite more
anananan chapter 6 . 10/8/2011
FASTER! UPDATE SOON! XD
Badee Badaa Doo chapter 6 . 10/7/2011
*Cheers* This is sooo sweet and well written XD
Sato Sakura chapter 5 . 10/1/2011
What about when Allen was about to reply Leenalee made plans to stop it and in the end Allen said no because he only wanted to be friends although Lou Fa had fell for Kanda/Lavi because one of them was saw by Lou Fa seeing how one of them is totally her type but Allen is only nearly totally her type sorry for the mistakes or bad ideas only 11 years old
Miss.Jessi-Pon chapter 5 . 9/8/2011
God Lenalee is such a bitch, lol. I just read this to make fun of Lenalee, sorry
Crazy-T7 chapter 5 . 9/8/2011
Great chapter though yes, it was kinda short. Take your time updating! We all understand that you have a life outside ffn. By the way, since Allen's a gentleman, he'd probably try to reject Lau Fa gently. Great story! :D
LenaleeAllenD chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
OMG! That was the best 4 chapters I've ever read!

You've got an amazing nd unique plot nd I love ur story so far please update as soon as possible!

LenaleexAllen FOREVER! 3 3 3
Kuroiikawa chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
Great chapter but UPDATE FASTER
The Mad Puppeteer chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
*cries* me wants longer chappie...:'(
Crazy-T7 chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
That was totally hilarious! Please update soon!
Kuroiikawa chapter 3 . 8/5/2011
Hey, I have a good idea! Lets have Lenalee Kill Lou Fa!
Sammy chapter 3 . 8/2/2011
Kaaaaaaaaaaaaak , lol , I laughed at the ending so hard , but you know what , I like lou fa and I hate lenalee so much , she's so girly , ugh , Allen is better with lou fa , but the thing is that man didn't have any kick ass girl in it , I hated that fact , all Lenalee did is cry and scream and wear those ugly skirts and shorts , and then what , she become the heart , she didn't work hard like Allen , to become that strong all of sudden , and I hated that soo much , the owner of DGM is very sexist , I mean she's a girl , why would she make the main girl so girly like that ? I really don't understand japanese people , so yeah thats my point.
LonelyRealm chapter 3 . 7/29/2011
Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I think you're doing a great job so far! It's getting interesting and I'm really looking forward to an update, keep it up. :D
TooLazyToSignIn chapter 3 . 7/28/2011
CAT FIGHT ICOMING!... oh wait that's a little overboard, how about GIRL WAR INCOMING!... that's better. Anyway enought with rambling and stating the obvious i would said i'm looking forward to your next chapter
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