Reviews for Forever
simplysimpre chapter 13 . 5/26/2013
This chapter had me smiling through the whole thing... I feel like a review whore... but I just had too! Forgive me.
simplysimpre chapter 10 . 5/26/2013
I sort of hate myself for not reading this story before. It's incredibly well written. Luckily, now I don't have to wait for updates as it's complete. Just had to say how much I'm enjoying this story.
island.dred.insomniac chapter 34 . 5/10/2013
I really enjoyed this story. It is the most believable depiction of the Twilight saga that I have read. The vampires needing the cold and decomposing in heat is brilliant. The characterization is well done. Everything is grotesque and beautiful enough to believe. This piece shows the true sterility of S.M. version of Twilight and I love the contrast. Well done.

Thank you for sharing and completing your work.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/14/2013
Where on earth did you get your information about Arizona? _
firefox2001 chapter 34 . 2/8/2013
This story was soooooo fantastic to read. I was a bit skeptical since there's soooo many like this. But I got sucked in to the story. Awesome job
Feelus chapter 34 . 12/27/2012

Oh god, that was one of the best stories I've ever read. Thumbs up, author! You are really awesome and this story likewise. :)
earfluffy chapter 26 . 11/21/2012
Hey guess what people who are reading this for the first time Ed-

"W-what, no you've made a huge mistake! I wasn't going to do tha- AAAAAAHHHHHHHhhhh... *thump*.

HealingRose chapter 6 . 11/9/2012
wow that last part was sexy...

HealingRose chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
"It was like she was trying to be friendly but something was holding her back. Prehaps she was possessed..."

lol, Love it!

username47 chapter 7 . 11/8/2012
awesome story
Lunaris-wind chapter 34 . 7/22/2012
As you suggest, I was indeed pleasently surprised. You took the narative in lots of directions, making the story your own, while managing to stick to the basic framework of the actual series. The only thing that bothered me was Russia. Based on your vampiric vision, Italy certainly wouldn't make sense, and Russia most definitely does, and yet the events in Russia were just strange.
Anon chapter 34 . 7/18/2012
This is good and I just thought you should know the quote had before at the end.

In-betweens chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
Oh wow, well Rosalie I know is probably just trying to do what's best for Alice AND Bella and the family all at the same time. So I mean, it's an excuse for her attitude and her 'bitchy' ways but it's most likely true. Lol funny that Bella called her a bitch and Rosalie heard her but can't really say anything about hearing her or risk their secret.

Not that Alice is doing much better about their secret, her excuses are at least medically engineered. The fact that Bella thinks Alice has an eating disorder is sweet, although sad that she might have cut off the friendship if Alice really did have one. Glad that Alice was able to tell her straight that she doesn't have an eating disorder. Also glad that Alice was at school and spent that time with Bella. It was adorable Alice using her cold hands to soothe away Bella's red cheeks.

I look forward to their conversation in the morning since Alice was caught...AGAIN.
In-betweens chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
Oh shit, Alice certainly did something to piss off Rosalie. That's NEVER a good thing. She's already scary on her own. No need to make her angry enough to make a scene in the middle of the lunch room. For doing their best to stay below the radar that certainly won't help their cause.

I'm glad that Alice seems to be better with Bella today and that they were able to talk amicably today and even sit down for lunch together. I look forward to seeing what comes next and what vision it was that Alice saw.

LOVED the comment about Bella thinking to scream out for a Bible of some sort to help Alice and her possessed self. :-DD
In-betweens chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
Oh wow, so Alice is taking on the stalker role in this story. Not sure how I feel about that. Especially since she was CAUGHT so easily. Was she that distracted by Bella's scent? I wonder if Edward can read Bella's mind in this story or if he still is unable to do so. Also noticed that Jasper isn't part of the Cullen group. Look forward to seeing if he ever was part of the group or if he never made it to Alice's side at all.
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