Reviews for My Mesmerizing Mirage
sam chapter 17 . 3/22
OK YOU BETTER MAKE ALICE AND SHUN TOGETHER AGAIN AND SHE JUST TRICK THOSE GUYS TO HELP SHUN
dISNEYl0ver chapter 14 . 3/1
GREATEST CHAPTER EVER!

THEY FINALLY KISS FROM THE WAY THEIR WANTED TO. not force,no doubts
hope to have a happy ending for you two
dISNEYl0ver chapter 13 . 3/1
SHUN FINALLY ADMIT IT! YAYAY
FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FOR LOVE

great chappieXD
dISNEYl0ver chapter 11 . 3/1
Sooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutte!
Shun laugh! Shun laugh! jejeje asking a kiss from Alice, JUST ADMIT YOU LIKE HER OKAY!

now I know I want Alice to end up with Joe as I said before, but now after reading this I am Back again from SHUN AND ALICE FEVER!
the chapter I like so far...
dISNEYl0ver chapter 10 . 3/1
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwww!
thats so sweet of you Shun

UPDATE SOON!
dISNEYl0ver chapter 9 . 3/1
Shun just admit your jealous okay to Joe okay. Look you got into a freaking accident.
dISNEYl0ver chapter 8 . 3/1
Joe finally confessed

Alice go to whom do you think that is right for you

I am a fan of Shun and Alice but in this story I prefer Joe to end with Alice, Shun just keep hurting her

UPDATE SOON!
dISNEYl0ver chapter 7 . 3/1
Shun don't do anything that could drift you away from Alice
You force kiss her. YOU POSSESIVE JERK!

what will happened after (well I will read the next chapter)
dISNEYl0ver chapter 6 . 3/1
EEEEEEEEEEEEEk! too early for them to kiss.
But is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute X-

UPDATE SOOON!
dISNEYl0ver chapter 5 . 3/1
Take that Shun! look Alice then choose Joe than you.

*sigh ALice is so too kind-hearted to forgive someone look what you found out, tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk

UPDATE SOON!
dISNEYl0ver chapter 4 . 3/1
its so obvious who has a huge liking over Alice (Joe duuuhh)

Shun ask Alice on a date, wonder how it happens

UPDATE SOON!
dISNEYl0ver chapter 3 . 3/1
a different Shun in this story

but still, SHUN IS HOT*squeals

UPDATE SOON!
dISNEYl0ver chapter 2 . 3/1
and now they met!

UPDATE SOON!
dISNEYl0ver chapter 1 . 3/1
hmmm great start:-)

but, man your words are so deep that I always have my dictionary with me to know its meanings.
well, English is my 2nd language duh.

UPDATE SOON!
CelerinosBFF chapter 17 . 2/23
You know I really love you (ehem..) i mean your stories...

It keeps progressing as you made a new story.
*hearts breaking* is this the end of SHUN and ALICE...NOOOOOOOOOO!
sorry when comes to Shun and Alice I am emotional,,,since they are my favorite in Bakugan. I've always want a happy ending to them.

*sigh* I am tired from my trip to hongkong (BEING HYPER, well 1ST time to go out of the country)
UPDATE SOOON! you will not discontinue this right? right?
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