Reviews for My Mesmerizing Mirage
Guest chapter 17 . 1/5
I reaaaallyyy love your story but it is making me sad that you can not continue it ...i hope that you will finish it some day
Kisses from Greece!;)
Random Girl chapter 1 . 1/1
I wanted to know... Are you ever gonna update this? I mean I went to your profile and saw that you left ffn (which is very sad in itself) but you said you'd return to complete this... and it's been more than a year and a half...so... update? please?
AliceGI chapter 17 . 10/3/2014
I know I liked this chapter. Alice should have told the truth but in the end she hurt him and also her. Please continue
Alice.Essaid chapter 17 . 8/3/2014
I think it will be miracle if this story could have ahappy end...and I love miracles .hopefully you could do one
sam chapter 17 . 3/22/2014
OK YOU BETTER MAKE ALICE AND SHUN TOGETHER AGAIN AND SHE JUST TRICK THOSE GUYS TO HELP SHUN
dISNEYl0ver chapter 14 . 3/1/2014
GREATEST CHAPTER EVER!

THEY FINALLY KISS FROM THE WAY THEIR WANTED TO. not force,no doubts
hope to have a happy ending for you two
dISNEYl0ver chapter 13 . 3/1/2014
SHUN FINALLY ADMIT IT! YAYAY
FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FOR LOVE

great chappieXD
dISNEYl0ver chapter 11 . 3/1/2014
Sooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutte!
Shun laugh! Shun laugh! jejeje asking a kiss from Alice, JUST ADMIT YOU LIKE HER OKAY!

now I know I want Alice to end up with Joe as I said before, but now after reading this I am Back again from SHUN AND ALICE FEVER!
the chapter I like so far...
dISNEYl0ver chapter 10 . 3/1/2014
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwww!
thats so sweet of you Shun

UPDATE SOON!
dISNEYl0ver chapter 9 . 3/1/2014
Shun just admit your jealous okay to Joe okay. Look you got into a freaking accident.
dISNEYl0ver chapter 8 . 3/1/2014
Joe finally confessed

Alice go to whom do you think that is right for you

I am a fan of Shun and Alice but in this story I prefer Joe to end with Alice, Shun just keep hurting her

UPDATE SOON!
dISNEYl0ver chapter 7 . 3/1/2014
Shun don't do anything that could drift you away from Alice
You force kiss her. YOU POSSESIVE JERK!

what will happened after (well I will read the next chapter)
dISNEYl0ver chapter 6 . 3/1/2014
EEEEEEEEEEEEEk! too early for them to kiss.
But is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute X-

UPDATE SOOON!
dISNEYl0ver chapter 5 . 3/1/2014
Take that Shun! look Alice then choose Joe than you.

*sigh ALice is so too kind-hearted to forgive someone look what you found out, tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk

UPDATE SOON!
dISNEYl0ver chapter 4 . 3/1/2014
its so obvious who has a huge liking over Alice (Joe duuuhh)

Shun ask Alice on a date, wonder how it happens

UPDATE SOON!
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