|Reviews for My Mesmerizing Mirage|
| sam chapter 17 . 3/22
OK YOU BETTER MAKE ALICE AND SHUN TOGETHER AGAIN AND SHE JUST TRICK THOSE GUYS TO HELP SHUN
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 14 . 3/1
GREATEST CHAPTER EVER!
THEY FINALLY KISS FROM THE WAY THEIR WANTED TO. not force,no doubts
hope to have a happy ending for you two
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 13 . 3/1
SHUN FINALLY ADMIT IT! YAYAY
FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FOR LOVE
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 11 . 3/1
Shun laugh! Shun laugh! jejeje asking a kiss from Alice, JUST ADMIT YOU LIKE HER OKAY!
now I know I want Alice to end up with Joe as I said before, but now after reading this I am Back again from SHUN AND ALICE FEVER!
the chapter I like so far...
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 10 . 3/1
thats so sweet of you Shun
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 9 . 3/1
Shun just admit your jealous okay to Joe okay. Look you got into a freaking accident.
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 8 . 3/1
Joe finally confessed
Alice go to whom do you think that is right for you
I am a fan of Shun and Alice but in this story I prefer Joe to end with Alice, Shun just keep hurting her
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 7 . 3/1
Shun don't do anything that could drift you away from Alice
You force kiss her. YOU POSSESIVE JERK!
what will happened after (well I will read the next chapter)
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 6 . 3/1
EEEEEEEEEEEEEk! too early for them to kiss.
But is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute X-
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 5 . 3/1
Take that Shun! look Alice then choose Joe than you.
*sigh ALice is so too kind-hearted to forgive someone look what you found out, tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 4 . 3/1
its so obvious who has a huge liking over Alice (Joe duuuhh)
Shun ask Alice on a date, wonder how it happens
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 3 . 3/1
a different Shun in this story
but still, SHUN IS HOT*squeals
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 2 . 3/1
and now they met!
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 1 . 3/1
hmmm great start:-)
but, man your words are so deep that I always have my dictionary with me to know its meanings.
well, English is my 2nd language duh.
| CelerinosBFF chapter 17 . 2/23
You know I really love you (ehem..) i mean your stories...
It keeps progressing as you made a new story.
*hearts breaking* is this the end of SHUN and ALICE...NOOOOOOOOOO!
sorry when comes to Shun and Alice I am emotional,,,since they are my favorite in Bakugan. I've always want a happy ending to them.
*sigh* I am tired from my trip to hongkong (BEING HYPER, well 1ST time to go out of the country)
UPDATE SOOON! you will not discontinue this right? right?