|Reviews for My Mesmerizing Mirage|
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 14 . 3/1
GREATEST CHAPTER EVER!
THEY FINALLY KISS FROM THE WAY THEIR WANTED TO. not force,no doubts
hope to have a happy ending for you two
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 13 . 3/1
SHUN FINALLY ADMIT IT! YAYAY
FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FOR LOVE
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 11 . 3/1
Shun laugh! Shun laugh! jejeje asking a kiss from Alice, JUST ADMIT YOU LIKE HER OKAY!
now I know I want Alice to end up with Joe as I said before, but now after reading this I am Back again from SHUN AND ALICE FEVER!
the chapter I like so far...
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 10 . 3/1
thats so sweet of you Shun
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 9 . 3/1
Shun just admit your jealous okay to Joe okay. Look you got into a freaking accident.
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 8 . 3/1
Joe finally confessed
Alice go to whom do you think that is right for you
I am a fan of Shun and Alice but in this story I prefer Joe to end with Alice, Shun just keep hurting her
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 7 . 3/1
Shun don't do anything that could drift you away from Alice
You force kiss her. YOU POSSESIVE JERK!
what will happened after (well I will read the next chapter)
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 6 . 3/1
EEEEEEEEEEEEEk! too early for them to kiss.
But is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute X-
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 5 . 3/1
Take that Shun! look Alice then choose Joe than you.
*sigh ALice is so too kind-hearted to forgive someone look what you found out, tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 4 . 3/1
its so obvious who has a huge liking over Alice (Joe duuuhh)
Shun ask Alice on a date, wonder how it happens
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 3 . 3/1
a different Shun in this story
but still, SHUN IS HOT*squeals
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 2 . 3/1
and now they met!
| dISNEYl0ver chapter 1 . 3/1
hmmm great start:-)
but, man your words are so deep that I always have my dictionary with me to know its meanings.
well, English is my 2nd language duh.
| CelerinosBFF chapter 17 . 2/23
You know I really love you (ehem..) i mean your stories...
It keeps progressing as you made a new story.
*hearts breaking* is this the end of SHUN and ALICE...NOOOOOOOOOO!
sorry when comes to Shun and Alice I am emotional,,,since they are my favorite in Bakugan. I've always want a happy ending to them.
*sigh* I am tired from my trip to hongkong (BEING HYPER, well 1ST time to go out of the country)
UPDATE SOOON! you will not discontinue this right? right?
| I3TRIGONOMETRY chapter 17 . 2/23
I can't blame Alice
She can sacrifice everything for her loves one sake.
But if she tells the truth to Shun, then they will not end like that.
She may be safe from Shuns Uncles wrath but may even be killed from Shuns hands (wish it will not happened)
He trust her and only her, and she just let him feel like that. Hurt and Betrayal.
Well I hope to have a great ending for this two. They are my favorite characters from bakugan.
They are the most popular and even surpassed DANxRuno
Well they have many fan sites, most been written stories in this FANFICTION by fans, and I even laugh when someone made a petition to have a Shun and Alice romance in the bakugan.
UPDATE SOON. EVEN I have to wait forever
you have awesome stories, good grammar, and more progressed from time to time.