|Reviews for Sea and Stars: Enemies Squared|
| Moon chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I don't mean to rag on insignificant typos, but reading the last line...
Basically, my thoughts went like this:
"He knew that if he waited until things were clam then John and he would never be married."
"waited until things were clam then John and he would never be married."
"waited until things were clam"
That's it, calm!
I really shouldn't be reading fanfiction at five in the morning.
| farawisa chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
well, with all the stuff you promise for the next one, i can't wait. XD
loved this piece. please go on soon!