Reviews for Fictionista Wrkshp Summer 2011 Sultry, Malicious
Perry Maxwell chapter 13 . 1/1/2013
Guess I have to log in, lol. Another beautifully written chapter. You do a spectacular job of capturing the very realistic thoughts that women have, even with men they trust. LOVED this line-I can't let other men pay for what one did wrong… especially when there is only one that I want, and maybe forever.

Off to read more...

Perry
Perry Maxwell chapter 14 . 1/1/2013
Another very sweet chapter. I'm glad the parental meeting at least start out nice. Let's hope it stays that way.

Off to read more...

Perry
Perry Maxwell chapter 12 . 12/30/2012
Such a beautifully sweet chapter on so many levels. *sigh*

Taking a break for now (family stuff). Be back later.

Perry
Perry Maxwell chapter 11 . 12/30/2012
"Let me love you, Bella," he whispers. - Swoon!

You have such a gift of making us FEEL everything with your words. Sooooo good.

Off to read more.

Perry
Perry Maxwell chapter 10 . 12/30/2012
Funny how the past takes up some much headspace when there isn't a damn thing we can do about it.-SO DAMNED TRUE! Rochelle, why are you in my head?

Off to read more...loving this!

Perry
Perry Maxwell chapter 9 . 12/30/2012
I'm so apprehensive; this is one of those things that can sound quite sordid if not put in to proper perspective. -THIS! Again, the world's opinion matters so much to us. Can you tell this is hitting a nerve with me? lol

Off to read more...

Perry
Perry Maxwell chapter 8 . 12/30/2012
Love this line, so sweet! - He half-smiles. As time goes on, I'll come to recognize that look. It always precedes a kiss.

I want to feel excited and good about this blossoming relationship with E&B. I'm just afraid that the rest of the world will mess it up for them. It's how it usually happens, though. Two people find their piece of happiness, and then outsiders want to maim it or dismiss it as authentic or correct, as if anything ever truly is.

Off to read more...

Perry
Perry Maxwell chapter 7 . 12/29/2012
I want to run my fingers through his hair, so I do. He opens one eye and peers at me. -I want a picture of what this looks like! GAH!

And a pic of this - "I'd really like to kiss you."

And, girl, it is amazing how you make me FEEL everything through your words. LOVE it!

Perry
Perry Maxwell chapter 6 . 12/29/2012
Oh, oh...getting more interesting. But, yeah, we're in a zone of WTF? What to do, what to do?
Perry Maxwell chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
This Edward is soooo sweet, but there has to be something else to him, right? Off to find out...

Perry
Perry Maxwell chapter 4 . 12/29/2012
This story is so sad, but I can't wait to see how Edward and Bella heal with each other. Win!
Perry Maxwell chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
This line says it best: There's having a type, and then there's having a type. This would just be…

That's exactly what I was thinking. I wonder if E&B will get into an argument later and B will call E "Masen" by mistake...

Another excellent chapter, moving things along.

Perry
Perry Maxwell chapter 2 . 12/28/2012
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Bella's thought process at this point. It's so real. I'm dying to know how Masen died too.

Perry
Perry Maxwell chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
So Jada rec'd this to me on Twitter, and I'm hooked! Girl, you know how to write ANYTHING. It flows so well, the descriptions are beautiful without being verbose, and you give us SOOOO much information in such few words. I LOVE that! Off to read more.

Perry
AuroralMemory chapter 43 . 12/15/2012
Lovely as always. I like the angst and sweetness in both stories, and I especially loved the first/second POV in Malicious.

Thank you for writing :)
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